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Beyblade: New Adventures, New Loves

By LoneeWolf

Adventure / Romance

Chapter 1: The Fight

It was a calm afternoon in Tyson's dojo, where, in the backyard, Tyson and Max were beyblading.

"Come on Draciel! Hit it!" Max screamed.

"Let's take them down, Dragoon! Victory Tornado!" Tyson replied.

"Yeah, yeah. In your dreams, Tyson! Gravity Control!"

And the two friends continue to fight until Draciel turn out to be the winner.

"Oh, YEAH! I tld you that I was going to kick your ass, Tyson!"

"Fine. Are you happy now?"

"As a matter of fact, yes, I am."

"Congratulations, Max" Ray said " That was one heck of a battle!"

"Thanks, Ray."

"Max" a female voice suddenly said " You got someone on the phone."

"Did you catch the name, Hilary?"

"Yeah. It's Rick. He wants to talk to you about Emily."

"Coming." The blond-haired boy said, running to the living room.

"What's wrong, Tyson?"

"Nothing."

"Aw, c'mon, you can trust me. You know it. What's wrong?"

"I SAID NOTHING IS WRONG, OKAY, HILARY?! NOW, QUIT BUGGING ME AND GET OUT OF HERE!" Tyson yelled.

"HEY, IT'S NOT MY FAULT THAT YOU LOST AGAINST MAX! SO, DON'T TAKE DOWN ON ME!" she yelled back. At this moment, everybody was staring at them, including Max, who had just come back from his phone call.

"I TAKE DOWN ON WHOEVER I WANT, YOU HEAR ME GIRL?!"

"JUST BECAUSE YOU'RE THE CHAMPION, THAT DOESN'T GIVE YOU THE RIGHT OF YELLING AT EVERYBODY! AND I'M NOT GETTING OUT OF HERE! I WANT TO BE HERE AND YOU'RE NOBODY TO KICK ME OUT!"

"CAN'T YOU SEE THAT YOU DON'T HAVE ANYTHING TO DO IN HERE?! YOU ARE NOT A PART OF THIS TEAM! NOBODY LIKES YOU, OR EVEN CARES ABOUT YOU! YOU ARE A DEAD WEIGHT THAT KEEPS PUSHING THIS TEAM DOWN!"

"Okay, Tyson, that's enough! You're going to far!" Kenny said.

"No, Kenny, let him speak." Hilary said, with her beautiful ruby eyes full of tears. "Now I wanna see what he thinks of me."

"AND BESIDES" Tyson continued " I DON'T GIVE A CRAP ABOUT YOU! YOU ARE JUST THE GIRL THAT, TWO YEARS AGO, MADE ME CLEAN THE CLASSROOM! YOU'RE NOTHING FOR THIS TEAM! YOU'RE NOTHING TO ME! SO, JUST DO A FAVOR TO THE WORLD AND DROP DEAD!" Tyson screamed, letting everybody shocked.

"That is what you really think of me, Tyson?" whispered Hilary.

"Yes it is."

"Okay, then. I can see that I don't mean anything to you. But is always good to know what people truly think of us. It helps us choose our path. And this is the path that you are making me take." And turning around and starting to walk away she said " Goodbye Tyson."


Hilary kept running through the streets, without looking back. After fifteen minutes of running randomly, she stopped in an abandoned amusement park where she sat down in an old bench and put her head in her small hands and cried.

"Why are you crying?" a voice asked. The voice was cold, but at the same time, sweet and trustable. And very beautiful.

"Why do you care?"

"'Cause maybe I can help. What's your name, princess?"

"It's Hilary." the girl asked, looking up to girl that talked. It was a beautiful young woman, with big, melted silver eyes and copper hair. Her hairstyle was similar to Hilary's but longer, waist length. She was wearing a white Tshirt, black jeans and white Air Force.

"What happened to you, Hilary?" she asked.

"Oh, nothing much. The love of my life just said I was useless, that he didn't give a damn about me, never had, never will, kick me out of his place and told me to drop dead."

"Oh my gosh…" the girl said, shocked. Then, after two seconds of thinking, she looked at Hilary and said " Do you need a place to stay tonight?"

"No, don't worry. I'll just sleep in… ha…"

"Is that a 'yes'?" she asked, smiling.

"Yeah, it is."

"Vey well then. Folow me, please" the girl said, walking away. Hilary got up and folowed her to a big mansion, hidden in the woods.

"Wow… Are you rich, girl?" Hilary asked.

"No, I'm not. My dad is, but I'm not. At least not yet."

"It's fantastic! Where are we going again?"

"I'm taking you to your bedroom." She said. She opened a door and showed Hilary a huge princess-style bedroom with a personal bathroom and a fashion studio. The bedroom was painted with light pink and white, Hilary's favorite colors.

"This is where I'm going to sleep?" Hilary asked, completely surprised.

"Yeah. Why, is there a problem?"

"NO! I mean, it's wow. I don't need all this!"

"Yes, you do. You're a princess. You deserve a princess room."

"Thank you, ha… Sorry, you didn't tell me your name."

"You'll know when the time is right. Now… Good night, Hilary." The girl said, shutting the door behind her.

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