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TFP Star season 1

By Eeva Andersson

Romance / Adventure

Darkness Rising part 1

category: Transformers
Author: Aili-chan in FanFiction.net
Genre: Adventure/Romance


AN: Okay, This story about my version of TFP with my OC Elena Stars. This first chapter will be all about Darkness rising episodes. I tried fix wrting eorres, so if you find one don't let it bother you. Enjoy! ^^


It was ordinary day in Jasper Nevada. On street full of shops one young woman about 20 or so is in one them. But on one you don't expect find woman. In hardware store. She has brown hair in ponytail and brown eyes. Pink blouse, jeans and white shoes. She was now in oil section looking for certain oils.

The Store owner, sweet old man has got use to her coming many times in past three years.

"Looking for something, ?" he asked.

"Don't you have smooth gear oil anymore?" she asked.

"Sorry, sold out. Next cargo comes next week." answered the owner. " For which car is it?" For what it looked for owner comes to buy many things for different cars. Maybe her family fix cars for living or has few cars.

"A truck." she said while she pick another oil can and comes to counter.

"Wooeee! A truck? Man, I hardly meet any pretty gals who are into cars." said the owner while star count the items. "More screw-nuts, huh?"

"We need to melt some for certain things."

"You have quiet a family, ."

"You could say that." she answered. Right then her phone rings and picks it. "Elena... Silver?... What's wrong?...Oh... W-why I wasn't informed... I-I see...And... where is she?... okay... thanks for telling me. Bye." she finish the call while looking so sad.

"Something wrong, ?" asked owner.

"Nothing. there... was... accident. How much is it?" After paying she leaves the store with her shopping.

Elena Star, was once known as Elena Rodriquez, before she was saved by Autobots. She had lost one arm, leg and eyes. her left side of the was burned, so she is now Cyborg made by parts of one called PeaceStar, who died two years ago to save her life. Ever since she changed her last name into Star.

Right now she got message that one of the Autobots, Cliffjumper was lost. He was like her big brother. but now he was gone too. Cold Irony. She dialogue number to her phone to call someone. The line got open, but no one didn't answer, yet.

"Arcee, I know you can hear me." she said to the phone. "I heard, about Cliffjumper. And I know I can't say 'I'm sorry for your lost' It doesn't suit well. I wish to talk to you. You know since I have lost dear ones too, but of course their probably nothing compare to yours..."

"I hope you're not going to use that line often." heard female voice from other side of the phone.

"Well, It works." said Elena jokingly.

"Fine. Where are you?"

"I'm near the that drive in restaurant. I'll go pick a milkshake. Meet me there."

"Okay. See ya."

"See yaaAAAAH!" she yelled, when one car from pick up almost drives on her. "WATCH IT JERK!" she yells to the driver and kick the car with her left leg in which car's front gets very nice hit. Who ever was in may have stayed eyes and mouth wide open. Elena then walks to the driver's side and looks inside.

"Making fun and leaving without paying?" she asked. The guys where still eyes and mouth wide open. Hard to was still because the hit she cave the car or that she knew what they were up to. She picks the lunch bags and walks to the burger restaurant.

Inside she went to the counter and meet young boy.

"I think they weren't hungry." she said and put the bags to counter.

"Wow...Thanks." he said.

"I may take one with me. Plus large strawberry milkshake." she said.

"Okay." he said and went prepare it. "How you knew they didn't pay?"

"I have seen them pull it many times. And this time they almost drive on me." she said, while she got the milkshake and paid for them. "Have good day, mr...?"

"Darby. Jack Darby."

Elena leaved to the outside, when she see Arcee coming , but stop front of her. She was about say something, when notice the two vehicles. by their color she could see what they were. Decepticons. Elena takes some milkshake before she passes and it's like talking to the driver on the motorcycle.

"I'll go check. I'll come back when it's clear." she said. Elena keep walking away from motorcycle while the driver vanishes and motorcycle stayed there.

Elena walk bit further to see if they went. By her optics under the hologram she manage to see bit further. No sight for now. She was going back, when notice them. They seem to look one direction. The drive in.

"Scrap." she run there only then the vehicles moved forward and motorcycle got away with a boy. It was that Jack Darby guy. "Double Scrap!"

Elena had no choice but run to the corner where no one would and use com-link. "Bumblebee! Bulkhead! We got twins! HURRY!". Then she pick something that turn into skateboard with blasters. She got on to it and followed them.

It took some time before she see Bumblebee and get inside him. she put all the shopping aside, while she put seat belt on. In these rides you need to secured for sure. And for reason. They manage to mislead them bit, but they got away.

"COME ON BEE! GET THEM! Arcee has human with her." she yelled. That was enough to pull more speed.

They got them to realize they have jump to the side.

"Bee. Don't you dare..." said Elena. He dared. He jump off and transformed, while Elena screamed for her life. Then she grab on his neck while he start fight. Once done, he tried took her off him, before he realized he step on to toy car and said sorry.

"No problem. Really..." said young boy with glasses.

Right then Elena notice this. But right then one the con got up and blast Bumblebee. In this Elena get off and landed near Bumblebee. She had to back off before she heard someone yell.

"Leave him alone!"

She look who did it to realize it was the young boy with glasses. "Oh no..." she said.

"Please?"

"Bad call."

When one of cons was going after them. Elena had to take of her hologram look off to use magnetism to hold it back.

"RUN!" she yelled to the boys.

She tried hold best she could, but like usual for big robot she either get stuck with it or she starts to follow behind. Fine let's try other way. From the front. She runs front of the robot and then she was pushed backward to the sewer where the boys have went. Soon she no other options then turn off the magnetism and follow the boy to the sewer.

They all run until the evil robot was pulled away and beaten, before Bumblebee look inside at them and beeped something to them.

"Thank you." said the young boy.

"(Your Welcome)" beeped Bumblebee and went back to the fight.

Elena was ahead of the boys and looked blue prints of sewer systems to get the boys safety before they dump of her.

"What are you doing?" asked the one name Jack.

"Looking which way to get you back to your homes" she said while kept looking.

"Are you one of them?" asked the young one with glasses.

"Half." she said. "They're my family for three years now. This way." she said and point the direction.

"What was that?" asked the young one.

"Less you know, the less chance get into trouble." said Elena. After long walk they get up to the street. "Look, promise me you won't tell this to anyone. I mean it."

"I got that already." said Jack.

"Well, yeah. I guess you do."

"Who are you?"asked Young boy.

"Like I said less knowing less trouble." she said and pick her skate board.

"You do know how to get home from here?" both boys nodded. "Good. I need to go now. Bye." she said before she left.


Elena was first get back to the base. And since she was in sewer, she went to take shower. When she had finished and was on her way to command center, others had already came back and have told what had happened to their leader, Optimus Prime. Elena, decided stay out of the conversation before Silver, Wolf robot came to her with her shopping. She pick them up and check them. Luckily there wasn't any fragile.

"Elena." heard the voice of Optimus. Elena look at his direction. "You where the last one with these kids. Where are they?"

"I took them far from the battle field to the streets were they get to home. Why?"

"Can you find them?" he asked.

Elena knew where this leads.

"You want them here, do you?" she asked.

"They could be in danger." he said.

Elena sighs and goes to the Star computer that's other side of the monitors. There she got information of their addresses and the school they went.

After all that she was on her way to her room.

"So much for that talk." said Arcee behind her.

"Cons sure know how to ruin the moments." said Elena jokingly. Arcee walks beside her to their recharge chambers

"Arcee, I..."

"I know... I have got use to that everyone I care will be taken from me."

"That's what I thought first."

"What change your mind?" asked Arcee.

"I'm still with you guys." said Elena smiling to her. "Especially him." on 'him' she meant Optimus.

Arcee look behind her to Command center where Optimus still was working front of computer. It been while since Arcee had talk about her feelings to Elena. Elena knew she had crush on him. For her, it looked like normal leader/soldier relationship with bit of friendship.

"Everything okay?" asked Elena.

"Yeah... I'm fine."

"Well, you need good rest. You're going pick Jack in afternoon. Bee goes too for other kid."

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