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In love with a demon

By Distorted Skylor

Fantasy / Romance

Fallen Angel

As we finished the song for the new Black Veil Brides music video, Fallen Angels. I went to go take off my make up. All of a sudden I got pushed into the wall by some of the others. The one who pushed me looks at me with a smirk. "You're not a fallen angel, you're a demon, a monster who nobody will ever like" he laughs and is about to punch me when a strong hand pulled me away from the punch. I look up to see him. He was perfect. His eyes, his hair, his smile~. "What's going on here" I hear him say to the three who tried to hurt me. The three look at him in shock. "n-nothing" the one who tried to punch me says before running off. I look back up at my rescuer. He looks back at me with a smile. With that one smile I nearly fainted. I've fell in love with his music. His story. Him. "A-andy? Why did you-" I was cut off by him putting his mouth over mine. I was shocked at first but I soon melted into the kiss. I couldn't believe it. He was really kissing me. the one I fell in love with. He is really kissing me. Maybe being a demon wasn't so bad after all

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