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By vampirehime92

Romance / Mystery

Chapter 1



Rated: M

Main Character: Alois Trancy

Warning: disturbing theme,language, sexual content, drama, angst, and tragedy

Summary: Alice Trancy, the sole daughter of Lord Trancy just returned from Germany because of the big news that her long-lost brother; Alois Trancy return for almost years. But things gets pretty strange when the ever 'kind and lovable' brother is actually…a sadistic and manipulative?

Can Alice ever endure this kind of brother? Or she will tangled on the sadistic blonde's web thread?

Disclaimer: I don't own Black Butler or Monoshitsuji, these series and manga belongs to Toboso Yana herself.

Back then...I only thought that my life will be tranquil at that moment...the moment when I found out my long lost brother was alive. I was so happy back then.

His gorgeous blond hair and the way he smiled.. but he smiles like a murderer.

It's a twisted wonderland...that only awaits were pain and suffering.

I was trapped and forever bond in this world of madness...

This world of madness called...HELL

Chapter 01: The Meeting

Jim Macken.

Outside the perverted old man's bedroom, the Lord of the Trancy manor has been already asleep and it's a perfect time for him to leave the room. Oh how he disgusts that crazy pedo!That old geezer should die in hell for what he has done to him and the other boys in the dungeon. His bare skin was full of bruises and all these marks come from that crazy old man's teeth. His body shakes with anger, One day, he will get his hands on that pedophile Earl. He will make sure of it.

"What are you doing here?" a small feminine voice asks behind him, Jim froze and glance to see a beautiful dark blonde girl wearing a white nightdress with a lighted candle holder on her right hand, she has a questioning look on her face.

Jim just stares at her and frowns, "Isn't it obvious?" he says sarcastically, the girl doesn't say anything. She just stares back at him with a concerned look; her heart sank as she saw the bruises all over his upper body.

The blonde girl pities him. She knew that her 'father' had these kinds of activities during at night in his bedroom; she knows that he captures boys and imprisons them in the dungeon below the mansion and he use them for his pedophilia. She closes her eyes, she started to hate her father so much when she learned about this but if she turns against him, she will get scold. She wanted to help those poor boys that are imprisoned in the underground but being just an inexperienced girl she was, she can't do anything.

"What?" the messy haired blond boy irritates with her silence. The blonde girl blinks twice, "I…I was wondering. If..." she stammers as she could see the boy's eyes full of hatred and loneliness while staring at her. Her heart softens, she want to help this boy.

"Would you like me to help you…. with your wounds?" she asked shyly, Jim blink in surprise, this girl that he doesn't know just offered her services to help him? He studied her, her kind expression and her angelic face seems to make him feel that he could trust her. He sighs, "Sure" he says in monotone voice.

The blonde girl smiles and drag the confuse-looking boy to the kitchen. "Come." She smiles at him, the boy doesn't' t say anything and his face tint slightly as he notice that the girl's small hand holds his while they running to the hallway of the mansion through the kitchen quarter.

As the blonde girl helps her fellow blond, Jim Macken just stares at her as she carefully puts ointment on his bruises. Her face serious while she helped him, while she stares at his bruises then a frown showed on her lips.

"My father, did this? Didn't he?" she murmur with disgust on her voice, Jim is just silent. The girl just decided took it as a yes and just continue to clean his wounds. As soon as Jim heard the word 'father' his eyes widen.

"So you're that nasty pervert's daughter!" he exclaimed with venom in his voice and keeps his distance away from the girl after learning that this girl before him was the daughter of the Head of the Trancy estate; the abusive and pervert Earl that fears by the poor boys in the dungeon of the mansion. The girl narrowed her eyes at her fellow blonde, "I deeply apologize with what my father just done to all of you, it's just that… he has been like this ever since my brother disappeared and my mother died in sadness because she can't continue living the thought that my little brother is gone." she told him with a sad voice.

Jim sees the sad look on her face, the same one he had when Luka died at the village, He suddenly hugs her, the girl startles as this blonde boy hugs her so familiarly.

"I think this is a better way to comfort people, isn't it?"

The girl closed her eyes and hugs him back, "Thank you" she whispers. Jim notices that her scent is the same as the person that is dear to him. The girl feels the same, she hasn't been embraced by any person in her entire life and the warmth of this beautiful blonde boy makes her feel at ease. They broke apart and silently laugh at each other.

As soon as she had finished cleaning his wounds, she quickly exits the kitchen. Jim can't hold it in any longer, "Can I ask your name?" he ask the blonde girl, the girl turns with a genuine smile on her face. "It's Alice…Alice Trancy, good night." she whispers, "Can I see you again tomorrow?" he asks her, Alice froze and flashes a sad smile, "Yes." She lied and exits the room, she felt guilty with what she just said to him. And Jim, for the first time since Luka died smiles a genuine, real smile. This girl, Alice Trancy has the same scent as Luka; his younger brother is as gentle as her.

"Alice" he murmurs the name of his new friend. He will see her again...soon.

Few days later, Jim notices that he hasn't seen Alice for a few days. Then, he just heard from one of the maids at the prison that Alice left the Trancy manor for Germany and they don't know when she'll ever return.

"Why...Alice...Why?" he thought angrily and he clenches his fists, shaking violently. Why did she lie to him! Didn't she just said that she'll be seeing him again?

He hates Alice.

She is a huge liar!

One year later


Alice Trancy was shock to learn from the rumors that her father died and that her long-lost brother has returned, Alois Trancy. She is studying medicine. She wants to become a doctor and serve the weak and injured people, she thinks about the blonde boy she met last year. She hopes that he's not angry at her when they see each other again, she sighs. Her luggage is ready for her departure for London.

She smiles, she couldn't wait to see her long-lost brother.

She couldn't wait.

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