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Fallen Hero

By BlueDragon007

Romance

Chapter 1

She watched a hero,

Fallen from the sky,

Knowing that his life will end soon.

She ran to his lifeless body, and his glowing green eyes slowly opened.

His eyes, lost their happy shine and tears started to run against her face.

He put his hand on her shoulder, giving her comfort that she needed.

He couldn't hold his tears anymore.

His white glow started to fade.

They both knew, that the end will come soon.

He knew that this is the last time that he will see his love. This is his last moment of humanity, and both of them knew it.

He opened his eyes for the last time. They weren't green anymore, now they were icy blue.

Two white rings showed around his body, revealing his true identity.

There was complete silence and the only thing that could be heard is his last breath.

She hugged tightly, his lifeless body and a cry of a girl was the only thing that left.


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