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Ninja Nina

By artsoccer

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Going Back in Time

Alfie's pov: "Nina!" Fabian screams as she falls to the ground and doesn't get up. Why don't I back up a little so that you know what's going on. Let's see I could start when Nina first came to our school, but that would be too far and besides you already know that story. I know I'll start the story on the first day back to Anubis house for junior year. Let's see, Nina had arrived a few hours ago, we were all talking and sharing our summer stories when two new kids came in. "Hello dearies I'm Trudy the house mother," I heard Trudy say as a greeting to the new kids. "Ah Mr. Brown you will be rooming with Mr. Lewis and Mr. Clark. Miss Corming you will be rooming with Miss Millington and Miss Martin," Victor said. What I didn't know at the time was that these two newbies would change my life and all the lives of the other boarders at Anubis house forever.

Nina's pov: The rest of the house and I went to go meet the newbies. When I saw their bracelets I realized that I knew them. "Nina Martin is that you?" Clare asked. "I haven't seen you two in years," I said. "Wait you guys know each other?" Patricia asked. "Ya we used to be best friends in America," John said. "Until you two moved to England," I added. "Aren't you going to introduce us Nina?" John asked. "Of course," I said pointing to everyone in turn, "Fabian, Amber, Patricia, Eddie, Alfie, Mara, Joy, and Jerome meet Clare and John." One thing I knew is that I had to put my bracelet back on and join Clare and John again in our fight against evil as ninjas.

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mrh: I have loved reading this story. It is amazing. I love how the one single event of meeting Draco has changed the story. This is such a great twist on harry's story. I would love to read more... will you be writing a Year 2?

John Smith: This is what Sci Fi is all about. Reads like early Heinlein. In the style of Space Cadets. No esoteric problems..but good ol blaster and space action with a host of relatable characters

Jean Tryon: As a beta, I found this story outstanding!! Plot, grammar, phraseology, etc Rachel gives us it all. She takes the story into the future from where due South ends. She is an exacting and thoughtful author.

mrh: This interesting take on the Harry Potter series fascinated me from line one on. I am in love with this tale and its characters and cannot wait to read the next chapter. I look forward to more soon.When can I expect the next chapter? I am so excited to read it!

Raymond Keith Moon: Great story arc. Nice command of the balance of overview and detail. Feels a bit like a multi-player computer game, but provides satisfying explanations for all the apparent magic. Please keep writing!

dragonswilleise: I loved this book, it was nearly impossible to put down from start to finish. It was fast passed without being overwhelming and slowed down where needed. Overall this was an amazing novel that I will definitely recommend to others.

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Samuel Garbett: I love the style.I love the setting.I love the atmosphere.You've tapped into something fantastic here, from the clearly invested-in characters down to the language used to portray the genre perfectly.I'd consider myself hooked.

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