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Beyond Repair

By Cobolt99

Romance / Drama

Prologue

So before I start, I just want to say that I was invited to the site by 'annfrog' and this is posted exactly as the original, (song chapters and all), but for the author's notes. The original is here if you need to read them: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10788343/1/Beyond-Repair

‘It’s too nice a Saturday morning for this.’ The janitor thought as he looked down at the unfortunate teen, his body stuffed inside a suit and mangled beyond repair. ‘That’s it,’ he thought, growing angry. ‘Something has to be done.’ The medic, hired in case of yet another accident, suddenly gasped.

“Hey! This kid’s still alive! Barely, but he’s alive!”

The janitor crouched down beside him. “How is that possible?”

The medic sighed. “He still has a pulse, but I don’t think he’s going to make it. And even if he does, his body is to broken to support him.” He glanced up at the other man then had an idea. He knew they couldn’t keep him alive as a human, but maybe… “There’s a big box in the back of my truck, and a box that looks like a tiny fridge, go get it, and hurry!” He added as the janitor took off running.

The medic turned back around and clasped his hands together. If they did this right, no-one would ever know, and they might even save the restaurant from closing. But first…

The medic pulled out his phone and called the programmer that had designed the much loved (and much hated by the security guards) animatronics. Then he started searched the young teen’s body for some form of identification as the janitor walked in.

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