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Dovewing's Choice

By Splashpaw

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Chapter 1

I'm new to this fanfiction; I just signed up today! My computer overcorrects things(I suppose all the warrior cats' names will be underlined with red print even though it won't show to you guys) but I'll try and make sure I don't misspell anything! Reviewiers: You are welcome to make comments on my spelling to help me, but I'll do my best! (Okay, now my computer's saying I spelled fanfiction wrong. And reviewers wrong. Hmmm…)

I don't own Warriors, but then if I did this wouldn't be a fanfiction.

Okay. My brothers have been asking me: Who should be Dovewing's mate ?And my friends seem to think Bumblestripe should be her mate. That doesn't make sense.I'll tell you why(you can disagree, but please do not be rude) . It's because she seems to like Tigerheart .Then,in Night Whispers, Tigerheart tells Blackstar about Jayfeather's herbs. So Dovewing tries getting close to Bumblestripe instead. Here's my problem with that: she doesn't even like Bumblestripe. Okay,I see it all,loyalty to her Clan. But Dovewing would be better off without a mate than with a cat she doesn't even like. I'm probably annoying you all with my nonstop chitchat. Okay,here goes. . . . Oh wait,one more is after the Great Battle.

It was raining. Thunder crackled in the sky. Dovewing blinked the rainwater out of her blue eyes. Bumblestripe padded over to her.

"The prey's all hidden in their holes. What do you say we head back to camp?" he mewed, giving her a lick on the cheek. Dovewing pulled away.

"You can go back to camp. I'll see if I can catch anything.I'll be back before you can say 'fresh-kill!'See you back at camp!" she meowed .

"Okay," Bumblestripe meowed with a sigh,then turned and headed towards camp."See you then!"

As soon as he was gone,Dovewing sniffed the air. Bumblestripe was right. There was no prey to be found. She sighed.

"Why is it that on the soggiest mornings there's never any prey to be found?"she grumbled.

"Hey!Dovewing!There you are!"

"Tigerheart?" she mewed. She sniffed the border. Yeah, it is him, she thought.Come on out Tigerheart, I know you're there!

"Dovewing!I was just thinking….you know, the Great Battle is over. . . .I ,um. . . ." Tigerheart trailed off.

"What?" Dovewing asked. You're not thinking of mating me, are you?Not when you're in ShadowClan?!

"Okay,I need to get this out. I want to join ThunderClan." Tigerheart looked at his paws.

"You'll see why in a moment. Let me tell you. Tawnypelt had a kit before the Great Battle. He really likes you, even though he's never met you - he saw you in the Great Battle .I think he'll try to mate you. . . And after I saw all the Dark Forest cats he killed, I started wondering if he would do that to get to you." Tigerheart took a deep breath.

"And I love you Dovewing. That's why I want to join."

"You'd do that for me?" Dovewing mewed. She looked at her paws, too, and the moment started to drag out. You'd leave your Clan, your kin… all for me?

"Yes, Dovewing. I would do anything for you." Tigerheart blinked."I would jump off a cliff for you, fight ten badgers for you. . .even fight StarClan for you."

"We'll talk about this at the Gathering tonight. One more thing- who's this cat's name?" Dovewing meowed.

"Raggedtail," Tigerheart answered promptly.

Sorry that was really short. The computer's really hot(it's always hot in the summer)so I have to get off before it explodes from the heat. Now let's see how fast I can update!

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