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The Outcasts

By Gumbee

Fantasy / Action

Beginning

Chapter 1:
Third person's Pov

It had been quite some time since the giants war. The lives of many heroes had been lost. Camp half blood's protection had weakened. All around, half bloods, centaurs and satyrs were rebuilding the destroyed cabins.

Percy's Pov

I was helping out in the rebuilding of the cabins. Naturally, I went to the Athena cabin where Annabeth was too. " Hey wise girl. " Annabeth turned and as she looked at me I saw that her eyes were red and there were some tears dripping down her cheeks. Instinctively, I went forward and embraced her. But as I did, I couldn't help feeling sad. Grover had sacrificed himself in the war- my first friend and the best satyr ever had passed away. " At least he's still growing well now ." I attempted to comfort her. Zeus had placed grocers soul into Thalias ex pine tree as he too was sympathetic that such a good satyr had died. Annabeth looked up and for a moment, she smiled. I leaned forward and kissed her on the cheeks before starting on the renovations of the cabins


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