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Waves of Emotions

By Matthew Galezowski

Other / Romance

Waves of Emotions

On the Blue Star, home to where Lucia belonged to, Hiro was sitting against the wall of the tower with Lucia resting on his shoulder. He smiled, while stroking her long pure blue hair. He later looked up at the sky above, filled with clouds and the Earth above him. There were many thoughts running inside his head that made him feel uneasy. He stared at his hand slightly, grasped it firmly and releasing it several times and then, he grunted.

"How? How will I tell Lucia? I know that she confessed her feelings about me and now, it's my turn. But, the question is, how will I do it?"

He made a sigh of disbelief.

It awoke Lucia from her slumber on Hiro's shoulder.

"Hiro? What's wrong?"

"Uh...it's nothing." He shook his head.

Lucia wasn't going to fall for it. She feels that something was up and she wants to know, what's what.

Hiro sees it and realizes that this was his time to open his heart. He turns to Lucia and stares at her complexion. Her eyes were pure green like grass and her hair was as pure as the warm blue lake.

She asked, kindly. "Hiro, what is it that you want to tell me?"

He replies to her. "Lucia..."

"Eh?"

Before she knew what was coming to her, he clasps his hands with hers. The calm wind blew her long dark aqua blue hair and Hiro's as well. His eyes were locked with hers, dead-on.

"Lucia, let me just say that you've been inside my heart since the day I first laid my eyes on you."

A hint of redness was shown on her cheeks.

"If I'd stayed behind back on Earth and you being left alone on the Blue Star, my life would have no meaning without you."

Tears filled up her eyes. "Hiro..."

He stroked her cheek softly and wiped her tears. "Lucia, after everything that's happened with Althena including Ghaleon, I've been wanting to say this for a long time..." With his heart beating rapidly, he spat out these words to her with a huge smile. "Lucia...I love you."

From the moment she heard him utter those important words, she gasped in bewilderment. She recalled the events that transpired her return to the Blue Star. And now, it was Hiro's turn who returned his feelings to her.

At first, there was a brief silence. But that all halted, when Lucia shed tears of joy on her pretty face. "Oh, Hiro!" She threw her arms around his lower back and responded back. "I love you, too! I could have never asked for a better person, such as you."

Right after their confessions to one another, they've leaned closer and Hiro pressed his lips with hers.

Lucia moaned deeply upon feeling Hiro's tongue exploring through her mouth, while Hiro follows the same effect.

By releasing the kiss, Hiro hugged Lucia warmly.

"Lucia, I'm never going to leave you."

"And neither will I, Hiro."

As they glare at each other's faces once more with smiles, they kissed again.

The sun shines brightly on the warm and endearing couple.

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