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My Perfect Ten


A spin-off of the book The Perfect Ten! (Not a sequel)

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"His eyes would leave me breathless. The way he looks at me as if he could see no other. That is what I truly crave for."


"Jungkook!" You shout from the kitchen. With your eyes locked on the stove, you quickly swivel around to place the freshly cooked pancakes onto a ceramic plate.

It doesn't take long for your husband to stumble out of your room, eyes half open and shirtless as he yawns. He scratches the back of his neck before walking over and hugging you from behind.

"Mm, morning." He breathes out.

"Morning," You smile. Jungkook lightly kisses your cheek before turning to the little girl giggling in the high chair. Her eyes light up as the familiar man leans over and kisses her cheek.

"Morning, princess." Your daughter smiles, making soft sounds as she reaches her hands out. Jungkook chuckles before lifting the small girl out of the high chair and plopping her in his lap as he sits at the table. You carefully place a large plate of food in front of him and small hands reach for it in a heart beat.

"Oh no you don't," Jungkook chuckles. "This is mine, princess."

She instantly pouts, her bottom lip quivering as she attempts her fake cry she so perfectly mastered. Only being six months and yet already mastered the art of pretend. You quickly grab her bottle and hand it to her, her small hands latch onto it and she basically snatched it from you and plops the nipple into her mouth.

"Sora, there was no need to snatch." You playfully scold her and she giggles before waving her bottle around and getting milk everywhere. You quickly jump back and Jungkook tries to stop her until the bottle hits him in the head.

"Are you okay?" You bite back your laughter and he clutched his head and nods.

"You're going back in your high chair, I'm not trying to get a concussion." He carefully places the little girl down before sighing and wiping milk off of his chest. Your eyes don't hesitate to look, something about your shirtless husband just made you feel-

"If you look at me like that I won't be able to hold myself back." He speaks lowly before glancing at you.

You scoff. "You're my husband, I have benefits."

He chuckled. "Right, so do I."

"You've been taking advantage of your benefits for a long time, Jeon. As you can see." You point to the giggling baby as proof.

"It was bound to happen," he smirks. "We went at it like animals on our honeymoon."

"I was already pregnant before our honeymoon." You argue. "I was pregnant before we even had the wedding!"

"Don't act surprised," he points the fork at you. "I told you I wasn't pulling out anymore."

"You told me while we were having sex, Jeon! Not really a great way to warn someone, don't you think?"

He raises a brow. "I think it was the perfect time. From what I remember, you didn't want me to pull out anyway."

"Jeon!" You raise the spatula in your hand and he chuckles.

You quickly wash your hands, placing the dishes in the sink and wipe down the counter. Jungkook passes you his plate before gently gripping your chin and placing a soft kiss to your lips.

"Breakfast was delicious." He grins.

"You ate a lot." You chuckle as he rubs his nose against yours.

"Mhm," He breathes out. "I'd like to eat a lot of something else right now."

"Mr Jeon," you smirk. "Behave."

"Mm, make me." He nips at your neck and you squeal as you try to get away.

"Nope, we have to meet your mother in an hour." You quickly swivel around him and he sighs.

"Right, I forgot." He mumbles.

"How can you forget?" You pick up your daughter and smile as she grabs your face in her chubby hands. "We're going to see the animals today, isn't that exciting?"

Sora happily claps and you turn to Jungkook. "You get dressed first."

"It's fine, you go first." He takes Sora from your arms. "Princess and I are gonna watch some cartoons while we wait for mommy."

Jungkook playfully lifts her into the air, causing the baby you burst into laughter. You smile at the sight before deciding to get ready first. Deciding to finally leave the scene, you head to the bathroom and shut the door. Jungkook walks over to the couch, plopping down and turning on the television. The screen becomes bright and Sora happily claps as she sits in her daddy's lap.

Jungkook sighs, gently kissing her head before leaning back in the couch. He smiles as Sora jumps in his lap, eyes bright as she sees the colorful shapes on the screen.

"Look princess," He smiles as he points to the screen. "It's a heart."

"Ah!" Sora claps and he chuckles before nuzzling his nose in her cheek.

"That's right," he lowers his voice. "Don't give your heart to any boys, or daddy will have to-"

"Jeon, don't start that!" You shout as you exit the bathroom with the towel wrapped around you. Jungkook chuckles before lifting Sora up and standing.

"You can only love daddy, okay?" He whispered.

"What are you telling her? She's six months, Jungkook." You take a seat at your vanity and Jungkook plops down on the bed, Sora clinging to his neck.

"I'm just warning her ahead of time." He playfully pecks her cheek and she giggles. "I have to protect my princess from the bad men."

"Did you also tell her that her daddy used to be one of those bad men?" You raise a brow as you catch a glimpse of him in the mirror.

"That's why I'm telling her, I know how men think." He argued.

"What if men aren't her taste? What is she prefers to go a different route?" You stand and walk over to your closet. Jungkook eyes you, watching your every move as you grab an outfit randomly.

"That's fine with me," He says. "As long as she's happy, then I'm happy."

You chuckle as you grab a pair of shorts and a shirt. You throw the clothes onto the bed and slowly remove the towel from your body. Jungkook grins, as he watches. You playfully slap him with the towel, careful not to hit the baby and he chuckles.

"You can't even tell that you had a baby," he smiled. "Your body is just the way it was when I first met you."

"Oh yeah?" You raise a brow as you slide into your underwear. "I don't know, I think I still have some baby fat."

"In the right places, though." He reaches over and grips your ass. You slap his hand away and he chuckles before placing Sora onto the bed. She quickly starts to crawl, trying to run as Jungkook playfully grabs at her.

"Daddy's gonna get you!" He grabs her feet and she screeches before falls face first into the pillow. You giggle before quickly getting dressed and throwing your hair into a loose bun.

"Alright," You clap your hands. "Daddy needs to go take a shower."

You sit on the bed and Sora giggles as she crawls over to you. You scoop her into your arms, kissing her chubby cheek before Jungkook stand and walks to the bathroom.

"Don't take long!" You shout.

"Yes, honey!" He teases and you roll your eyes.


"Sora!" Jungkook's mother instantly grabs the baby from Jungkook. You smile as Sora happily giggles, hand in her mouth as she sucks on her finger.

"Ugh, Jungkook did the same when he was a baby." She shakes her head.

Jungkook huffs out a breath and you snort as you walk inside the mansion. You're greeted with the soft sounds of giggles and you smile as you see Mr Jeon on the floor with a small toddler in his lap. It's amazing actually, with all of the odds working against his mother, she was still able to give birth to a healthy baby boy.

The little boy's eyes brighten once he sees Jungkook and he's quick to jump from his father's lap and leap into the older's arms.

"Hyung!" Jungkook instantly lifts his younger brother into his arms and spins him. The little boy laugh before grabbing Jungkook's face and making eye contact. The little boy did this out of habit, whenever he needed to tell someone something, he would grab their faces and make eye contact.

"Hyung, we go see animals today!" He smiles.

"Yeah? Which animal do you want to see?" Jungkook chuckles.

"Lion!" He exclaims. "Lion go roar!"

"Wow," Jungkook's eyes widen. "They go roar?"

"No, you have to do it loud Hyung," he shakes his head cutely. "ROARRRRRRRRR!"

"ROARRRRRRR!" Jungkook imitates and he giggle as he nods.

You smile softly at the sight and Jungkook's mother clears her throat before turning to you.

"Would it be alright if I kept So for a few hours on Saturday?"

"Of course." You smile. She smiles genuinely before nodding and bouncing Sora in her arms.

"Heard that, baby?" You grin and Jungkook raises a brow.

"Heard what?"

"Sora is staying with her grandma on Saturday."

"Oh yeah?" He grins. "Then we should do something."

"You should," his father sighs. "You two haven't had time for yourselves since you've had her."

"Thank you." You lean over and kiss his cheek.

"Well," Jungkook's mother breathes out. "Shall we get going?"

"I'm gonna see lion, yay!" You and Jungkook chuckle before he sets his brother down. "Noona!"

"Yes?" He runs up to you and grabs hold of your face and leans in.

"You hold my hand?"

"If you want me to." You nuzzle your nose into his and he smiles.

"I love Noona." He suddenly confesses and Jungkook raises a brow.

"Hey, she was my Noona first." He says childishly.

The little boy pouts and you pull him into your lap and snuggle him into your chest.

"I love you, too." You kiss his cheek and he grins happily before turning to Jungkook and sticking out his tongue.

"Noona mine!"

"I don't think so, buddy." Jungkook chuckles before walking over to you and grabbing your hand.

"You see this?" He points to the ring on your hand and you blush.

"Shiny!" The little boy says and Jungkook nods.

"This is a ring." He states. "And this means that she's mine."

"Ring?" He repeats and Jungkooks nods.

"Yup, so that means-"

"I get Noona ring too!" He turns to you and grabs your face in his small hands. "Noona want ring?"

You chuckle. "I do."

And the look on Jungkook's face is priceless.


Hello, it is I. So here's the "prologue" or whatever it is. Remember this is not a sequel and it has no main plot, just random one shot sceniors bundled up. Your daughter's name is Sora, So for short which is what Jungkook's mother calls her.

Expect fluff, angst, smut, vmin, and a lot of Jungkook's brother trying to hit on you 😂😂😂

Hope you enjoyed ❤️

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