Get Free Copy

100 free copies left

This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.

Free copy left
You can read our best books
Khải Nhà Quê would love your feedback! Got a few minutes to write a review?
Write a Review

First meeting

By Khải Nhà Quê

Romance / Mystery

Saint Petersburg winter...

They walk in a snowy day.

They cannot see anything. It's too cold to believe that we can meet someones... Someones...

In another place...

They also walk away. The weather in Russia very cold, not warm.


And suddenly, both of them,... face against each charter, under the snow.

They look again, and... they asked: "Who are you?"

The man in here answers: "We have Friendship Telecards. But you... look similar. I've met you before?"

Then, that guy brings a hamburger, and said: "I'm America, Alfred F. Jones." and the strange replies: "America, my name's Dora-the-Kid, from USA." and all of them surprise: "Brother of own land!"


At another, two men appear. Both are wearing the scarf, but the only one who said: "Who are you?" And that man worte to a paper: "I'm Dora-nichov, part of The Doraemons." He repeated: "Dora-nichov, I'm Ivan Braginsky, or you can call me Russia." And they face... for a while...

The Asian small guy appears with another... Doras guy.

1st man: Who are you? And what's your name?

2nd man: You are Japan? If that so, I'm Doraemon.

Japan: Doraemon. Very funny...

Doraemon: Kiku Honda, can you realize me?

Japan: Well, at snowy weather, I need more time.


With 4 anothers, they also face... either. But they won't ask. They represent.

1st man: My name's Francis Bonnefoy, or France.

2nd man: My name's Wang Yao, or China.

3rd man: Happy. My name's Dorapin, Mysterious Thief.

4th man: My name's Wang Dora (you look similar, Yao.)

And they keep looking, while with anothers, everything also doesn't change much. A man asked: "You are Dora-med III, right?" and...

That is Dora-med III: "So you are Egypt." and he said: "You can call me Gupta Muhammad Hassan." And anothers guys... they represent.

1st man: Feliciano Vargas, or North Italy. And he's South Italy, or Lovino. What's your name?"

2nd man: My name's Jaidora, Italian fantastic cook.

And they keep looking, and little are talking to each charter,... but not much.


The last are ... two guys...

"Hello. I'm El Matadora, bull fighter from Spain." - 1st man represents.

""And you told my name, Spain. Or you can call me as Antonio Fernandez Carriedo." - 2nd man answers.

And they look...

El Matadora: You are good, Spain.

Spain: You too.



Dora-rinho then asks: "What are you waiting?" Then they tell:

"Somedays, we will meet again."

And they walk away... under the snow in Saint Petersburg, Russia.


Snowy day.

Write a Review Did you enjoy my story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, Khải Nhà Quê
Continue Reading
Further Recommendations

M.L. Bull: Hello, Aalia!Your story compelled the emotional pain and struggle of a teenage girl very well.. The imagery was also convincing and well-written, showing the different personalities of your characters and their actions. However, I do think that many of your sentences are too lengthy and could use...

MavisMcQueen: "To Live Again" is a well crafted, highly engaging, heart vibrating tale surrounding our favorite Elven King. The author will keep you engrossed until the very end and by that time you will feel so strongly for Clara and the other characters that you will never want it to ever. Thrandu...

Julia Summers PA: Reading this now. It's fun, hilariously fabulous yet taste of what you desire in a unusual read. I will post an actual review when I am finished. But so far loving the flow and the story seems to keep me drawn

FateFellShort: I have read this story and have followed the writers on tumblr from the beginning. Its a wonderful story. Beautifully written with a really nice pace, that makes it enjoyable to read more than once. For me, fairy tail has very good characters but what the writers have done is give them more depth...

PurpleInkling: Hippocrite is spelt hypocrite.Also it is an awesome story! A good one after so long. I was hoping someone would write a good fanficiton playing off what Ron said at the station. You are doing a remarkable job. It would have been interesting if Albus had also ended up in Ravenclaw though that mig...

Alex Reltin: This is a great story! I love how well you go into detail and emotions of Capri, and Mel. You have amazing dialogue and overall it's just a thrill to read!The only critique I could find is that some of the paragraphs should be separated. For example:-"If Nia would have just let me take the car an...

Felisa Yoder Osburn: I really enjoyed the story. Civil War stories are some of my favorites and the intertwining of the past with current times was wonderful. I look forward to reading the next stories.

Jade Jez: What a wonderful, immersive book from Eliott McKay. It starts with an air of mystery, introducing main character Michaela, the clumsy teenager. From there, it whisks you off your feet and dumps you into a beautifully written world where you can almost smell and hear everything happening. I go...

RubyScars: I absolutely love your story! It killed me when I finished, I read it all at once and then it stopped at the epic cliffhanger! Uggggggh. But, that said, it just means that you have done such a lovely job. I am so in love with your complicated characters, and even the ones I didn't like you slowl...

More Recommendations

Jordan Young: *ALERT FOR POSSIBLE SPOILERS* Where to start? I don't know how to sum up this review, this story was absolutely sensational. Brilliant. Flawless. I loved every single bit of this story, it is truly amazing. I read this story in fifteen hours, it is magnificent. I loved everything about it, the p...

263Adder: Okay so I adore this story. I only knocked one star off plot for historical inaccuracies because I'm a bit of a stickler for that. The ending broke my heart though, considering you already changed history couldn't you (SPOILER) change it a bit more and have them together!!!! I want an alternative...

This story wasn't for you ?
Look at our most viral stories!

FreakyPoet: "you made me laugh, made me cry, both are hard to do. I spent most of the night reading your story, captivated. This is why you get full stars from me. Thanks for the great story!"

The Cyneweard

Sara Joy Bailey: "Full of depth and life. The plot was thrilling. The author's style flows naturally and the reader can easily slip into the pages of the story. Very well done."

This story wasn't for you ?
Look at our most viral story!

Ro-Ange Olson: "Loved it and couldn't put it down. I really hope there is a sequel. Well written and the plot really moves forward."