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Future Pains

By Dragon3042

Drama / Romance

I'm Coming Blaze

“Meph!” Silver said in pain, the white hedgehog was suffering whilst strapped to a steel examination table not even two feet away from where I was tied to a chair, I was unable to help my lover and it’s all my fault. I could lose my future, my mate, I could lose… Everything…

1 Year Earlier

Silver’s P.O.V

Alone, again. I perched myself on top of the single building that wasn’t smouldering and burning to the ground. I’ve been alone for a long time now and it’s all because of so called ‘love’, after what happened with Blaze I couldn’t help but blame myself. I know she told me it wasn’t my fault but I couldn’t help but think I could have done something more to save her. I watched as an unknown city slowly crashed and burnt along with it’s people, another city, another rampage. I know Blaze wold be screaming at me angrily from the heavens but I couldn’t help but lash out at whatever stood in my way which happened to be innocent lives. I had ran into Sonic and his friends but after the first time they fought me, they didn’t dare try me again… They didn’t stand a chance. Today though would be the end, the end of it all… I levitated over to a burning hotel and hovered over it with my telekinesis, I then proceeded to let myself fall. Strangely I didn’t fell the pain of my flesh burning but instead I felt myself getting gently pulled away from the flames, I soon blacked out from exhaustion.

Mephiles’ P.O.V

I quickly and silently slid out of the way of the crumbling hotel with the unconscious hedgehog in my arms, ‘Poor guy’ I thought to myself. He’d been doing this for weeks without end, I’ll admit I loved every second of watching innocent lives get thrown off the face of the earth, but there was something about his pain that I wished he didn’t have to experience. I felt him stir in my protective grip and I looked down at his slumbering figure “rest now, move later” I whispered into his ear not knowing if he could hear me. He started to relax and drift back off into the unknown of dreamland, I then reached into my head quills and pulled out a purple chaos emerald and chaos controlled to my mansion. It was a grand place and looked like a palace to others but to me it was just my normal, casual home. I walked inside and placed the telekinetic hedgehog known as Silver on my king sized bed with it’s soft velvet covers for his comfort. I do have a spare bedroom but I thought it was best to put him here so I can keep an eye on him and get some well needed rest myself. l only knew his name by the many innocent lives screaming it before a grizzly death fell upon them, I thought that it would be a while before he awoke from his slumber so I sat in one of my arm chairs and soon enough my eyelids started to close and I too was asleep.

Silver’s P.O.V

I woke up groggily to an extremely soft sensation underneath me, was this heaven? “Blaze?” I said softly to the dark void surrounding me but I got no response. I slowly started to come back to reality and I realised I was in someone’s bedroom and an absolutely beautiful one at that, it may have been dark but it was obvious how rich this person was. At that moment I realised that a hedgehog that looked just like Shadow was resting in an arm chair not too far from where I had been sleeping. When I say this guy looked just like Shadow, I mean it! The only difference was the fact that his stripes and hover skates were a pale blue instead of crimson red like Shadow’s, “Hey, where am I? Who are you?” I said loudly and watched as the strange hedgehog started to awaken, he yawned and stretched “All in good time… Silver”

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