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Valdarella,The Beautiful Plegian Maiden

By Yadixella

Fantasy / Romance

The Beautiful Valdarella

Valdarella,The Beautiful Plegian Maiden

Validar was the new King of Plegia,since former King Gangrel,apparently died,in the last battle against Prince Chrom of Ylisse and his Army,The Shepherds.

Validar wanted to resurrect Grima,The Fell Dragon,but he knew The Shepherds were a very powerful Army,and they could ruin his plans,so he had to find a way to destroy them,and someone as wicked and powerful as him to do that task,luckily for him,that someone was on his own family.

Prince Chrom was the new Exalt of Ylisse,taking the place of his late sister,Emmeryn,he married his tactician Yadi,and sired a daughter,Lucina,and finally peace was restored at Ylisse,but unfortunately that peace didn't last for long,a new threat appeared,the dangerous and powerful Valm Empire,that was led by the Emperor Walhart,who after conquering all the Valm continent,wanted to invade Ylisse,so Chrom and The Shepherds departed to Ferox in response of Flavia's request for help,but Ylisse and Ferox's Army were not strong enough to defeat the Valm Empire,so by Yadi's suggestion,they requested a meeting at the new Plegian ruler looking for Plegia's aid,and that meeting would be held at Carrion Isle,however,Chrom didn't like that idea.

And it was at Carrion Isle where a beautiful tale of love,romance,and family began.

Chapter 1:The Beautiful Valdarella

King Validar had been informed that Chrom and his Army,The Shepherds,arrived at Carrion Isle looking for his aid to face the Valm Empire,and he was holding a meeting at the outspot with Aversa,his subordinated,a beautiful,sensual,and dangerous vixen,who was a Dark Flier.

"So,Prince Chrom and his annoying Shepherds are here in Carrion Isle,and he wants a meeting with the new Plegian king,looking for help to face the Valm Empire,Eh?" Validar said."But what he doesn't know yet is that I'm the new king of Plegia! I can't wait to see his face when he learns the one who once tried to kill his beloved sister Emmeryn,is the new Plegian ruler,HAHA!"

"Yes,it's gonna be a priceless moment," replied Aversa.

"But you know,Aversa,I think we should give them a special welcoming before that meeting,don't you think?"

"A special welcoming,eh? Oh,yes! A very hellish idea! I like it,I could lead the Army and give The Shepherds a warm reception."

"Um,actually Aversa,I was thinking of someone else to lead that attack."

"What? Someone else?" a very flustered Aversa asked."And who that might be?"

"You'll see,my dear," Validar answered to the woman."Soldier,bring her to the meeting."

"Yes,your majesty."

"Her? Who's this HER?" Aversa wondered.

Minutes later,the soldier came with a beautiful young woman.

"Did you call me,Validar?" the young lady asked.

"WHATTTTT,YOU?" angrily shouted Aversa.

"Yes,my dear," Validar replied to the girl."Aversa,I supposed you remember my little sister Valdarella,right?"

"Of course,Milord! How could I forget HER?" muttered Aversa."That little brat!" she whispered very upset.

"Well,Valdarella had been studying at an elite magic school,and she grew up to be a very skillfull and powerful magician,and now she wishes to enter the Army,so I'm going to give her the opportunity to prove herself,so she will lead that attack to The Shepherds,right sis?"

"Oh yes,big brother!" Valdarella replied."I'm gonna show my keen magic skills,and I'll wipe out those Shepherds at that battle! I'm gonna be more powerful than this ugly and old witch!" the girl said in a sneering tone,referring to Aversa.

"WHATTT? How dare you,little brat?" Aversa mumbled,and she was really furious."With all due respect,milord,I don't think Valdarella is qualified to lead that battle,she's very young,and she doesn't have any military experience."

"What's the matter,Aversa? Are you jealous of my sister? Afterall,Val is younger and prettier than you,and she could become a better magician and war strategist than you in no time,she could even become the General of the Plegian Army! Come on,Val,let's discuss the battle strategy."

"Oh! The General of the Plegian Army? Really? I would love that,big brother!" Valdarella cried really thrilled as she stuck her tongue out at Aversa.

They left the room,and Aversa was alone,and she could barely contain her anger.

"That spoiled brat! She always tried to outwit me at everything! That's why she decided to study magic,and convinced Validar with a tantrum to enroll her at that magic school,and now she's back and wants my position,but if little Val thinks she's gonna get rid of me so easily,she's in for a big surprise,HAHA!"

Valdarella,or Val for short,was Validar's little sister and she was really a beauty,she had a long,straight,and silky black hair,and her skin was smooth and tanned,her face was very pretty with big,brown eyes;Val's body was very beautiful and slender,and she was very young,just 19 years,and surprisingly,the evil and wicked Validar actually cared for his sister,he was overprotective with her,and didn't want to see men courting Val.

End of chapter 1.

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