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Back to the Basics Blader Style

By Falco276

Humor / Drama

Note from Seme Censor

Sample Legal Disclaimer:

Metal Fight Beyblade characters (c) Takafumi Adachi.

Storyline/Text (c)2012 Falco276. All rights reserved on the Text/Storyline.

Cover art (c) 'DA artist' (I can't draw so I need an Deviant Artist to help me with the cover art)

Published according to the UK copyright law and the author is grateful to have received legal permission from the original creators to use copyrighted characters; Whilst every effort has been made to trace copyrighted holders, "PUBLISHER" would be pleased to hear from any not acknowledged.

So, I seeked permission from HawkearOfWindclan and she actually said yes I can use her story and turn it into the MFB version of it. If you really don't believe me then simply PM me about it and I shall reward you with a plain but simple chocolate chip cookie.

This is just part of the story (not full) concerning the Disney ARC. Full story will come soon- Well, it's happenening right now. XD

All lemon/yaoi/sex- call it whatever you want- scenes are REMOVED (yes, caps, removed) cuz it was on that day that I'm done reading MFB fics that are rated M. Totally. And I'm freakin serious.

Here is a small list of the character pairings replacements:

Sora/Riku= Gingka/Kyoya

Roxas/Axel= Jinga (nobody version of Gingka)/Reiji

Demyx/Zexion= Chao-Xin/Da Xiang (They were kinda missed out on my KH MFB story so I really had to let a pair of dumplings be involved in this story.)

Sephiroth/Cloud= Faust/Damian (Duh, naturally.)

Zack/Genesis= Zeo/Toby (Why the hell not?)

And the other names are from Final Fantasy.

Please don't kill me about the name pairings. That's what I decided to do according to my replacement cast from my Beyblade Metal Fusion: Kingdom Hearts story.

Setting: Chesapeake Bay and Virginia Beach/ Daytona and Orlando, Florida.

This fan fic is a leap year story, meaning that it starts with the year 2009 then goes through 2011- until Hawkear decides to continue the story- and I happen to follow the North American MFB timeline instead of Japanese so that means the season 1 cast didn't even appear in 2009. That's 2010 for Metal Fusion. xD

Also, if you plan to read this fic as if it's like a movie, then I suggest you to read and visualize the intro as if it's really like a movie to you. The intro song is Ginsu by Tritonal, because I just felt like making this song matching for the intro. xD

Enjoy. :)

Opening beat of the song thumps through the club as both Reiji and Jinga twirl and grind their bodies against each other like they usually do when they get all hyped up for some Shonen Ai time. The Serpent Blader winks towards Jinga as he quickly grabs his arm and twirls him around until smirking snake eyes lock onto those lovely brown as Reiji holds Jinga's back from falling down. With the Serpent Blader's arm juxtaposed with Jinga's at length, the smaller redhead gulped as he expected a kiss from the pyro. But surprisingly, he opened his eyes to feel the taller redhead breathe into his left ear and cautiously whisper, "Our love didn't end yet, Jinga. It's only just starting. Let's go back to where it all started."

With the song to slow but fading pause, Reiji helps Jinga stand straight and looks hopefully through out the window of the club, the neon lights flashing red and purple as if there was a day time traffic accident occurring outside of the club. "Let's go back to the basics."

Calm beats introduce the face of the sea belonging to the middle of Chesapeake Bay, fish minding their own business as they swirl around the words "Falco276 productions presents" and "A Metal Fight Beyblade Mature fanfiction"

The main exciting part of the song beats up when a seagull explodes out of the surface of the water, fish writhing around it's beak when it soars over a luxury yacht with the words "Sibelle" on the back, as it shoots upward towards the sky and with the glint of the sunlight, words in halogen ice blue as the title "BACK TO THE BASICS BLADER STYLE" watches the state of Virginia Beach as the seagull swoops down towards 501 Holly Crescent Drive, where Gingka and Jinga play "catch" with other when the baseball is caught by the seagull's mouth and glides over to King's mansion and let's go of it, the sport ball as a missile striking on of the top balcony windows, which made King cry for one of Kyoya's brothers to appear and demand to tell him honestly who did it. The Seagull then dives down towards the old house where we see Damian and Faust about to kiss but only for Kerbecks the dog to happily interject the love scene and bark once for attention.

The song comes down to the concluding end where the seagull finally circles the rooftop of XLC High School like a Vulture trying to find some bullied freshman laying motionless in a knockout on the roof top when it finally leaves and the camera pans down towards a running red spiky haired freshman trying to get the attention of one of his classmates.

Next chapter is where this scene begins. :)

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