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Straw Hats Vs Straw Hats

By Neb Storm

Adventure / Action

Chapter 1 Intro to fights

Neb: I do not own Onepiece

Luffy: I'm going to be the Pirate King

The Straw Hat crew some how got sepperated on a dark Island where the forest was thick and covered with fog. Luffy had run into a lady who was carrying a strange tablet in her hand. Zoro ran into another Shady character who was a couple of inches taller than him carrying a Sword as big as Mihawks, but it was red and had a black stripe going down it straight to the hilt that had a Bulls Skull carved on it. Nami had run into a woman who was hidden in the fog as well and the rest of the Strawhat Crew had run each into different opponents. The Island they are on, is called Ultimate Battle Island, for it's legend is said that who ever is on this Island will have to face a greater opponent than anyone they have seen before...

"So we meet at last Straw hat," A woman with long black hair, silver eyes, pail skin, and is dressed In a purple Skirt. "Um, who are you," Luffy asked?

"I am Nia the Universe Jumper. Here's the deal, I've come by a Universe where you got as far as you are now, but with different people." "Why would I have different people, this is my crew," Luffy wondered. Most people would get annoyed by Luffy's dumbfounded reaction, but she smiled. "Because in this Universe... your barrel was sent to a different ship than the one your pink haired friend was on, and washed up on a different Island where you collected a different First Mate named Arvis, Straw Hat, I want to test your crew against theirs the winner of this fight will prove who is the strongest Straw Hat crew.

"I'm definately going to win," Luffy grinned.

"No your not, I am," another Luffy shouted. He wore a red leather vest and golden wrist bands. his shorts were blue and the Same Straw hat was on his head. Two long scars ran along his face and his hair was longer and tied back into a fox tail hair style. His fists hardened and so did Luffy's and they charged at eachother.

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"So you wanna fight me," a dark skinned man with a wolf tail hair style with brown eyes and wearing a blue Hawaiian shirt and beige cargo shorts grinned. Sanji lot a smoke and starred at the man darkly. "I think it was obvious from the start, that we are the better Straw Hat Pirates," he shouted. "I am Henry Steel Foot, the Straw Hat's Cook." Sanji's eyes moved from calm to anger at this man for taking his title, and not to mention, Steel Foot instead of Black foot, who is he trying to impress. They both charged at each other and began throwing flurries of kicks.

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Nami was standing in front of a girl who had a big backpack on her and wore pink goggles. Her shirt was a pink Hawaiian shirt with white flowers and her shorts were beige Cargo pants. They both grunted at each other before drawing their weapons. Nami drew her steel staff and she from her bag two strange looking rectangular blades that had flat tops like Zoro's bounty hunter brothers. Fionna the Copter girl at your service," she shouted before charging. Nami ran into the fog to prepare a strategy rather than fighting her in an open area.

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Usopp was freaking out in the mist because he could hear laughter all around him. "Shit, what did I get myself into," he cried. He turned around to see a man who had several cuts around his face sown up and had red eyes and a long pointy hat. He wore a black jacket and grey long pants. "Creepy Jack at your service, I bring a scream where I'm from," he introduced with a bow. "So your the other option rather than me huh." Usopp was shaking in fear causing the man to sweat drop. "It's my face isn't it," he asked? Usopp nodded still shaking.

"Sniper vs Illusionist, lets see who wins."

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"Where am I, someone help me, Usopp, Robin, LUFFY," Chopper screamed. "Well, this is awkward," said a woman with White long hair, antlers, and tanned skin, green eyes, and a tattoo of the strawhat symbol on her shoulder. She wore a long white summer dress and she gave a kind smile. "So he would have got an actual reindeer instead of a human with a slight mutation," she smiled. "Who are you," he asked while pressing his arms against a tree and shaking. "I'm Vicky and your hiding the wrong way, she pointed out as she sweat dropped.

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"Where did everyone go... ow," Franky asked as he walked through the woods. A man wearing a white leather jacket and black leather pants with an Afro jumped at him and kicked him in the back. "Ow, my foot," he yelled. "I;m made out of super strong metal," Franky pointed out. "Super... yea I guess it's kind of groovy," he admitted. "Ready to fight for real yo," the man asked. "Sure thing brother, ow," Franky replied.

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"That music I hear it's wonderful," Brook cried as he heard a flute play from within the mist. A girl with black hair tied into pigtails carrying a flute wearing a black miniskirt starred at him as the mist cleared around them. "You," Brook gawked. "Yes," she replied.

"You"

"Yes"

"May I see your panties," he asked.

"Hell no," she yelled before kicking him in a tree.

"Luffy sure knows how to pick them Yohohoho."

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Zoro turned his head and saw a man with dark skin carrying a sword the size of Mihawks. He was taller and his eyes were dark brown. He wore a plain white T-shirt and he wore long black pants. He grinned at Zoro who grinned back. " Pirate Hunter Roronoa Zoro," he laughed. "Death Blade Kenichi Arvin," Zoro laughed. "I wanted to face you, but you were executed," they both said at the same time. "Who is stronger..."

Alright, this is the start of a new fanfic. As I've said, I do not own. Question is, which straw hat members should I send up first. After all fights are finished who will be victorious, and more importantly, If our Straw Hat crew prevails, who do I send them up against next. Surely you have your own Straw Hat OC's or at least different versions of the real crew. Pleasse review to your hearts content!

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