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True Friendship

By BlazingAngel

Fantasy / Action

Prolouge

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
True Friendship


Prologue


"Let see if you can save your friends." said Ace, picking up two huge wall from the school and, with one swift move, throw them at the girls.


The girls quickly dodge from it except for Pinkie Pie, who couldn't sense it in time.


But then, she was quickly pushed out of the way by Red, who has run to her to get her away from the incoming walls.


"Whoa!" she exclaimed as they were running to a nearby walls to take cover, "I could`ve get panned down by those walls."


"Well, you better pays attention next time or you`ll be sorry." Says Red, ducking from a big rock Ace has thrown at him.


By the time they got to the wall, Twilight and Applejack was already there. Rainbow Dash, Rarity and Flutter Shy was at a another wall next to their.


As Red and Pinkie Pie got behind the wall, Red spoke out, " This is crazy! I just got here three days ago and everything here went even more crazy!"


" Yeah well, not if Ace have to take the Element of Harmony to use it against us all." scream Applejack, trying to keep her head down from the debris.
Ace throw another huge rocks at them but hitting their rear.


At the same time, Rainbow Dash, Rarity and Flutter Shy ran across the yard to meet with the other three.
" We got to take back the crystal!" Twilight yelled above the crashing rocks, " It giving him power to use against us!"


When she said this, the wall they`re hiding behind was lifted and thrown at the school. "Found you." says Ace, pointing out his finger at the group and make a circle, which cause a ring of fire to trap around the group inside.


Ace then held out his hand and said " Now, to make ends meet."


At the palm of his hand, it form a big black explosive ball and throw it at red and the Equestria Girls.


Then, there was a white flash.


3 Days Earlier


Into a world of Equestria, to a enchanted land where all the pony lived, to a forest not far from a village called Ponyville lie a field. Just a ordinary plain field. 

Then, something unexpected happened.

 Out in mid-air, came a portal. Out of the portal came a tan, brown-haired, brown-eyes stallion stepped to the ground and, without realizing he can`t stand on his two legs, came trembling to the ground. He could n`t understand why he can`t stand up on his legs. 

Fearing he lost his legs, he look down and noticed that he don`t have any fingers or toes, just …. hooves? 

The stallion examine the area around him, of course he know he in a middle of a forest but where? He got up, this time on four legs and began heading west. He found a paved road and began taking its course downward. The stallion hoped he`ll find answer of where he is and what happened to him. As he was walking, he found a pond off his right. He walked up to it and, when he looked down into it, he grasped. 

A pony, really? He thought, trying to overcome himself from going into panic.

 He then remembered something.

 The portal, he thought, it just carried me to a different dimension. Back home as a human, I heard rumor that each different dimension have different appearance and background. But, nobody ever told me there was a pony world. 

As the stallion think about it, he heard a voice coming from the other side of the pond. He look up and saw a yellow-colored skin, slightly pink-haired mare feeding some animal near her.

 At last! Some help, The stallion thought.

 He went around the pond and walked toward her, on which the mare did n`t notice, and said " Um.. Hello?"
When he said this, it really frightened the mare. As she yelp, she quickly close her mouth and stare back at him. 

After what seem like a very long second, she whispered back, " May I help you?" 

" Um.. yeah," began the stallion, making his tone more serious, " I was walking around here and I got kinda lost and can`t find my way out of the forest. Can you help me?"
" Well every pony know a way out."

" To where?" asked the stallion.

" To Ponyville, of course. Are you a traveler? It seem that you never heard of the place."


"Umm, yeah kind of." replied the stallion.


" Well," began the mare, " let me finish up feeding these animal and I`ll take you to Ponyville."


"Thank you" exclaimed the stallion, he was delighted for a way out.


After the mare finish up feeding the animal, she packed her bag, turned and whisper, " Well, lets go."


As they started to head into the wood, she said to the stallion again, " By the way, my name is Flutter shy."


" Oh, the name is Red."


" Red? What a funny name. I never heard a pony named 'Red' before." She said, surprised, " anyway, nice to meet you Red."


Red noticed that every time Flutter shy talked, she seem to be quieter and quieter. Well, it doesn't matter, she seem nice, He thought.


"Red? What bring you out into the Everfree Forest?" Fluttershy asked.


"Oh," began Red, "I was, um, send out here to find a missing pony from my village and has to bring him back."


"Really? All the way out here?" asked Fluttershy.


"err, yeah." replied Red.


"My, I never heard a pony running away this far." says. Fluttershy


"I know right?" says Red, hiding sarcasm.


He doesn't want to lie to her but it was true. He is going after someone. All he remember is that he saw a spark of electricity coming in this field, then a person walked through the portal and Red was going after him to bring him back. The End. 

"Well, here we are." Said Fulttershy as they were walking out of the forest.

Up ahead is a village. A nice quiet village. "Thank for helping me out of the forest." said Red.

"You`re welcome, I hope we will meet again soon." 

She said then walked down into the street and disappeared among the crowd.

Now, Red must find this missing person or "pony" and bring him back home.

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