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Caelan: Back so soon

By MiyakoIzumi

Drama / Romance

Caelan

Caelan woke up, and found himself surrounded by salty water. He quickly ran on to the shore. He couldn't believe what had just happened. He closed his eyes and thought of Valkyrie. The first time he tasted her blood, fresh and clean. "Fletcher," he said "will pay, and Valkyrie will be safe with me!"

He started to walk towards Valkyrie's house, then he froze. In front of her doorstep was Fletcher, he wanted to rip him to shreds. Valkyrie came out and gave him a hug and came inside. Right when Fletcher was going to close the door he caught a glimpse of Caelan.

His eyes widened then shut the door quickly. Caelan smiled, he was having fun already. Caelan climbed up to Valkyrie's window and jumped through. Valkyrie and Fletcher came through the door. Before Fletcher could even raise his hand Caelan jumped on him. Even Valkyrie had to jump out the way to avoid being pushed.

Fletcher threw a punch that knocked Caelan of his feet in to Valkyrie's wardrobe. Caelan knew her parents weren't home because, Alice wouldn't be crying. Caelan got on to his feet and kneed Fletcher in the stomach, he faltered and fell. Caelan jumped on Fletcher and threw him against Valkyrie's bed.

Fletcher's lip was bleeding. Caelan prepared his teeth, but right before he could bite him Valkyrie stood in front of him. "Back off" she said. He backed off. " Fletcher!" Valkyrie shouted. But before Caelan had a chance to bite Fletcher they were gone. "Damn!" Caelan cried. He left Valkyrie's house and headed towards the park and disappeared.



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