Get Free Copy

100 free copies left

This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.

Free copy left
You can read our best books
Na_E9384 would love your feedback! Got a few minutes to write a review?
Write a Review

Forbidden Love

By Na_E9384

Other / Drama

Chapter 1

Cole always had something to hide. And he always hid it well. But there is one thing that he has been keeping a secret for a while. Cole is sort of a brat sometimes. He is the type of person that loves to joke around and just be himself.

On the other hand, there was his twin. he looked at Matthew as the younger twin rather than the oldest. He was always jealous of Matthew. Matthew is the better looking twin between them. Cole thought that Matthew had a better love life than him. Truth, neither one of them had a love life.

Aaron, who is the third oldest, is always caught in between. he was always the serious one. as much as he loved all of brothers, he could never choose one over the other. Choosing is one of the hardest things he hates doing.

Being the youngest of all, he hated it. Will was always left out. Whatever activity it was, his brothers never acknowledged him. He felt like he was the odd one out. He just wished that he could have it all.

"Will are you coming down for dinner or not?" Cole replied. Will stood in front of his window, looking out at anything.

"I'm coming." His attitude coming out.

"Sheesh. Don't need to snap at me.' Cole left him and went downstairs not waiting. He didn't have time to wait around for Will.  After a few seconds later, Will left his room and walked downstairs.

"About time you came."

"Aaron! That's enough coming out of you. We have heard enough swearing from you lately." Their dad interjected.

"I'm sorry. I just thought that all we ever do is wait for him." Cole nd Matthew who were sitting on the other side of the table, were snickering at something that was funny. The three of them just sat at the table waiting to be served their dinner while their mom was getting the food out. Will stood up to help his mom to get everything set up.

Dinner was eaten in silence. No more than two words came from Aaron, Matthew and Cole. An occasional nod was provided from time to time. the three of them were about to leave the kitchen after dinner, when they were stopped by their parents.

"Why can't Will do it?"

"Because Will is the only one who ever cleans. The three of you could start." Their mom answered back.

"Well we all know that Will is a spoiled selfish loser." Aaron retorted. Cole snickered from behind him.

"And I suppose that you would love to earn another week of being grounded." Their dad smiled.

"Are you fucking kidding me?!"

"Hey! Watch your languge." Dad barked out.

"I can't believe you're grounding me for another week dad." Aaron whined.

"Well, taking you're mother's car out for a joy ride and getting drunk is not a good enough reason to ground you."

"Pretty much."

"You're not off the hook. Or do you want me to add another week for you?"

"Two weeks is good enough." He gritted his teeth as he glared at Will. He was about to say something to him, but he was gone in seconds before he could say anything.

Will was sprawled out onto his stomach on his bed. He grabbed his laptop after he finished his homework. He opened up his chat to find any of his friends online. There wasn't any at that moment. He flipped his screen into something else and searched the web for something to do. A blinking window indicated that he had an incoming message. He clicked on it and saw that it was his best friend.

-Hey Will!

-Hey T, what's up?

-Not much. Just trying to finish this stupid history paper. I don't have one word written down and it's due tomorrow.

-Yikes. You're in trouble.

-I know. How about you?

-Finished a long time ago.

-You're such a dork.

-Thanks Tad.

-Your welcome. Hey man, I'm gonna try to get this done. Want to meet up tomorrow before class starts?


-Cool. Talk to you tomorrow.

Will closed the window after they finished with their conversation. He browsed for a little bit longer before he got bored. As he got up and stretched, he checked out the time on his bedside table. It was eight the last time he checked and now it was ten thirty. He couldn't believe that he spent over two hours on his computer.

Well, the majority of it was spent on his project. He closed his computer and walked into the bathroom in his room. He splashed his face with water to feel relaxed. He took his time getting under the covers and closing the light.

The last light that shut off, was in Will's room. After the last light was shut off, he opened his window quietly. Cole made sure that there was no one outside his door and closed it.

"Cole?" Someone replied in the dark.

"I'm right here." He walked over to the person. He silenced her before he took her shirt in his hands and took it off. They slid under the covers once they were naked. Letting their bodies become one in the night.
Continue Reading Next Chapter
Further Recommendations

Angel S. Adames Corraliza: Sensational! As a fan of superheroes, I have to say, you have a real winner of a story so far. I like that you made Allison a Wonder Woman expy, but kept her likable and relate-able in this first chapter. You showed us the Mother while also glancing at the Superhero, which I think is important to...

rajastreet: I enjoyed this piece! I loved the treatment of time and the premise! Some of the wording seemed a little out of place, but easily overlooked for a good a plot.

Melderise: This is just an amazing novel that teaches you how to break the bonds of reality. It shows how the most fascinating story can start from the most regular environment and then leading the reader to the dream destinations...

Ben Gauger: Kudos go to Liz Aguilar, author of To Have And to Hold a fast-paced, gripping, adrenaline rush from start to finish, one of perhaps the finest pieces of writing I've ever read, in particular because of its' telenovela-like feel, May she continually find success as an author. Bravo my dear, bravo!

ernbelle: When I first started this story I was a little unsettled by all of the information that appears in the prologue, and wasn't sure if I would continue. However, I am very glad I did. The plot was very well thought out and really interesting. There were not any page breaks or markers to acknowledge ...

Janaki Sundararaman: The frame of the story has a beautiful structure on which the narration is spun with twists and turns tolook forward with lots of expectations about the coming chapters.There are many characters in the story line,all woven into intricate style to speak the story in its own way.The protagonist is ...

ianwatson: The comedy is original and genuinely funny, I have laughed out loud many times reading this book. But the story and the plot are also really engaging. The opening two or three chapters seem quite character-dense but they all soon come to life and there is no padding, filling or wasted time readin...

M.L. Bull: Hello, Aalia!Your story compelled the emotional pain and struggle of a teenage girl very well.. The imagery was also convincing and well-written, showing the different personalities of your characters and their actions. However, I do think that many of your sentences are too lengthy and could use...

aeratheninja: Interestingly enough, this story touches on different psychological states and was very informing, on top of being a solid story. Although somewhat predictable, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this; I could feel the fear and the frustration of the characters, and was happy when they were happy.Even ...

More Recommendations

mrh: This interesting take on the Harry Potter series fascinated me from line one on. I am in love with this tale and its characters and cannot wait to read the next chapter. I look forward to more soon.When can I expect the next chapter? I am so excited to read it!

Jessie: I wrote a review on fanfiction but I thought it would be fitting to write on on here too :) This story was honestly stunning. I am a budding writer myself and to read this- to FEEL this- reminded me of why I am honoured to have this passion and drive for a craft that is just so raw and beautiful.

Ashley Stryker: So I'm writing this review, keeping in mind that this is a work in progress and it's part of National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo), so my "deeper" critiques will be saved until it's all finished up.+ Chapter One: A stewardess would not talk to anyone quite like that, particularly a clear minor...

This story wasn't for you ?
Look at our most viral stories!

FreakyPoet: "you made me laugh, made me cry, both are hard to do. I spent most of the night reading your story, captivated. This is why you get full stars from me. Thanks for the great story!"

The Cyneweard

Sara Joy Bailey: "Full of depth and life. The plot was thrilling. The author's style flows naturally and the reader can easily slip into the pages of the story. Very well done."

This story wasn't for you ?
Look at our most viral story!

Ro-Ange Olson: "Loved it and couldn't put it down. I really hope there is a sequel. Well written and the plot really moves forward."