The Case of Elizabeth Bathory!

Chapter 7

Me: Hello readers, I am sorry for the long wait.

Mai: D-chan do you want some tea?

Me: Yes please, thank you, okay who is going to do the disclaimer today. *Pull out a hat out of nowhere.* Today we are having John doing the disclaimer. Thank you John.

John: Sure thing D-chan. D-chan does not own Ghost Hunt, she wish's she does. but she does own the story, the idea and the plot.

Me: Thank you, John. Well on to the story. :)

Mai: Please review, thank you. :)

Mai's P.O.V:

I watch as the girl's began to light candles. The candle's gave some light, I could see there face's. They were wearing blue skirts and white blouse's. They looked like they came from a private high school students. Sitting in the middle was a ouija board. I frown. They shouldn't be doing this. I try to step closer but Gene grabbed my hand and shook his head. I stared at the three teenage girl's. They began. "Is there any spirit's here?" One of them said. The ouija board's pointer began to move. "Yes." The girl said. "What's you're name?" They asked, the pointer began to move again. "S. A. R. A. H." One of the girls read aloud. "How old are you?" The girl with long brown hair pulled into a high pony tail asked. The pointer moved again. "18." "Why are you still here?" They asked, I began to feel chills, they ran down my spines.

Naru's P. O. V:

I woke up an hour later. I looked down to see Mai, who is still sleeping, I smiled. Then I turn my head and stared out of the window. We were in a valley, and in the distance you could make out the mountains. The sun began to dip low in the sky. Making the sky change to a pink and orange color. "We will be there soon we only have to get past the village of Čachtice." Kirstie said. I nodded. Then Takigawa yawned and stretch his arms. "Are we almost there, Naru?" He said. "Not yet we have to pass a village called Čachtice." I said. He nodded. I stared at my book that is laying on my lap. "The Bloody Countess." by Valentine Penrose is the book that I am reading, so far I have only made it past Chapter 3, page 56. I open and began to read again, flipping through the pages.

Mai's P. O. V:

I watch the girl's continued. I felt another chill. ".I. W.A.S. M.U.R.D.E.R, L.E.A.V.E. B.E.F.O.R.E. S.H.E. C.O.M.E.S." The girl said. "What do you mean before who comes." A girl asked, her friends began to become closer together. "E.L.I.Z.A.B.E.T.H. B.A..." the candle's flicker. "What is it saying? Why did you stopped?" The girl said. "I don't know why it stopped and she said a name Elizabeth." The girl said. Then a girl from the group got up and began to walk away. "Helen, where are you going? Come back here!" One of her friends called. I got a bad feeling about this. "Wait don't go that way! You'll be killed if you go that way!" I shouted. I try to run after the girl. But she was far ahead and then she disappeared in the dark. Her friends got up. "Helen come back!" One of the girl's said. They chased after her. My heart beat faster. Then the scene changed.

Masako's P. O. V:

I began to feel dizzy as we got closer to the castle, "What is this?" I thought to myself. I saw a woman with long brown hair, wearing a plain white dress. She was really pale. She was mouthing words, but I couldn't understand what she was saying. It sounded muffle, then I heard "Leave, while you can..." it was really faint. "Why?" I said to the spirit. She began to talk but then I heard a evil laughter. I began to sweat. I could feel the blood leaving my face. "Masako are you okay? You are really pale." John said. "I don't feel so well all of sudden." I said weakly. "Do you sense something?" Naru said. "I sense a woman with long brown hair and she is wearing a plain white dress. She is speaking but I can't hear her. But she did said "Leave, while you can.." but that is all I could make out and I heard some evil laughter." I said. "Lin." Naru said. Lin nodded and began to write down what I described. "Also Kirstie can you open a window back here?" John said.

Naru's P. O. V:

The castle came into view. I notice that Masako began to sweat and become really pale as we get closer to the castle. She described a girl. Kirstie open the window, a nice cool breeze came blowing in the car. Making my hair blow in my face. Then before we know it Masako eye's rolled up into her head and she passed out. John gently caught her before she hit the side of the car's door. I sighed. Lin continued to write. "Kirstie did any of you're tourist collapse?" I asked Kirstie. "Yes sometimes, and they wake up saying that they saw a girl with long brown hair and wearing a plain dress telling them to leave the castle." Kirstie said. Lin stopped writing. Everyone looked up, except Mai, who was still sleeping.

Mai's P. O. V:

I was now in the spirit plane. Gene stood there and pointed in front of me, there I turn to see the spirit of the girl named Helen. She looked at me. "Leave, she is coming... " She said. "Who is coming?" I said. But I was standing alone with Gene, she disappeared. I sighed, then the scene changed and I was now standing in the middle of the castle. I saw a tub. There was candles for light. The door creaked open, a woman stepped in the room. Her shoes made clicking sound. The woman had long red hair. A maid came in holding a big jar. "Lindia." The woman said. The maid quickly came over, the maid had long brown hair and she was wearing a white dress. She helped the woman out of her gown. The gown crumbled to the ground. The woman got into the tub. The maid poured red liquid onto her. I covered my mouth. The red liquid was human blood.

Me: Well I am going to stop here reader's.

Everyone: We hoped you enjoy the chapter.

Me: I will update soon.

Everyone: See you next time.


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