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It's a Lot to Carry

By SassyCop

Drama

Chapter 1

"You all right, love?" Cal asks as she is walking away from him.

Gillian stops walking. She pauses before she turns toward him. "I'm fine. Why do you ask?"

"I saw that, you know." He walks slowly toward her.

She looks down bracing herself. She looks up at him. "Saw what Cal?" She tries to maintain a neutral expression. She knew at some point a case would come along that would blow her resolve wide open. She immediately scrambles in her mind, looking for the proverbial way out.

Cal stops in front of her. "What was it Gill? Who hurt you?" He says it so quietly.

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