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I sit by you and spread my wings
To protect you as you sleep
As you lie wrapt in a silvery cocoon
Made of the tassel of your hair.
And gently I caress your cheek
To bring peace to your troubled mind
And still the raging tempest
Of your ice tormented dreams.
Witch borne yet borne a pure spark,
We refused to believe the wonder
So forbade you to join our circle
As our sister of the stars.
When you strove to touch The Light
We ignored your pleas for help.
Then The Dark lashed out
And seized your heart
Froze your spark in a coffin of ice.
I alone am your secret lover
Who silently guards your sleep
Who stands up against the Dark
In a fight to free your spark.
So come tomorrows dawn,
May you emerge and spread your wings
No longer as Witch Icy
But as Faerie Ishandra.
SandraHan1: This story is very descriptive, with vivid scenes from the very beginning, which made for a good scene setting. I love the symbolism in names, such as “Naysayers”, “Hadd”, etc . The story itself is revolutionary, intriguing, emotional and exciting. I was very pleased to see that there is a happy ...
Laraine Smith: My only suggestion on the grammar is to use www.grammarcheck.net. I have it bookmarked on Google Chrome. I see myself in the determination in this beautiful story! I have Cerebral Palsy, and I have dreams that I have been working hard for, too! The humor made me laugh!
William Elliott Kern: Long story, the plot uncovered midway through the story. From beginning, the story was fast moving. Then dragged on for quite some time. The Author was good in describing her characters, their clothing, etc. but a lot of that disclosure distracted from the story moving fast.Not withstanding, the...
_Dusks_kiss: I never knew that one of my favourite childhood cartoons could turn into such a beautiful story. Tho there are many grammatical errors and writing errors, this story warmed my heart to 100%. I would definitely want this book to get published and I would also buy it. It’s amazing character develop...
Ro-Ange Olson: This is such a different romance story. I loved it. The book was very long and could be split into 2-3 books in my opinion, but I'd hate to have to wait to read the next part too. I loved the chapter from Darius's point of view. It was a really different way for the writer to cover time and also ...