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Dimension Jumpers

By KittyKat_Bella

Adventure

The Machine

Bella and the Eds were in Edd's garage. Felice was standing next to Bella. Edd was working on a machine and was almost done.

"So, what are you building?" Eddy asked, becoming bored.

"If my calculations are correct," Edd began, "This machine should allow us to travel to alternate dimensions."

"Woah, way cool!" Ed said. Felice meowed in amazement.

"Really?" Bella asked, "That's amazing! When's it gonna be done?"

"I should be finished and moment now," Edd said, "Just a small tweak here, a twist there...complete!"

"I wanna try, I wanna try!" Ed said, bouncing.

"Calm down, Ed," Edd chuckled, "You'll test it in due time. Now, this here remote will allow us to travel back to this dimension so we don't get stuck."

"Ok ok, hurry up," Eddy said.

"We just stand on this platform," Edd said, pointing to a platform under what looked like a shower head, "And press this button."

He pointed at the red button.

"But Double D, in the movies you're never supposed to press the red button," Ed frowned.

"Don't worry Ed, this one's safe," Edd assured.

"So how do we pick what dimension we go to?" Eddy asked. Felice nodded.

"Well, that's one small problem," Edd said, "It's a bit random, but that does make it all the more fun."

"That does seem funner than just pick and choose," Bella said.

"So, would you guys like to test it out?" Edd asked.

"Ed first! Ed first!" Ed shouted, jumping onto the platform.

"Ed, wait for us!" Bella called as she, Edd, and Eddy stepped on. Ed quickly pressed the button, but not before Felice jumped on and they were all teleported.

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