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AOT: New Enemies

By Mystie Johnson

Romance / Drama

Chapter 1: Intro

                                     *Chrystal's POV*

"Why are we here, though?" Leena complained. She has been doing this since we got here a little while ago. "Its extremely hot."

"I thought we could hang around during the summer because ive always wanted too and plus we talked about it during the school year. Now would you stop complaining, I know its hot, but seriously, your complaining's getting annoying." I told her

"Fine, but can we at least go in the woods for bit later?"

"Yeah, of course, I had already planned too."

                  *Off in the distance - Armin's POV*

"Is that them?" Levi asked Armin, trying to keep out of sight from them. They were hiding in the woods, spying on former Cadets of the Scout Regiment, they were both one of the bests in different categories. Now, they were sent to this weird dimension with there memories of our world erased, replaced by ones that weren't true.

You see, we were at war, not only with Titans, but with people. These people are half Titan and hate the human race and are choosing the Titan side.

The Scout Regiment is now used as what they were originally used for, to explore and defeat Titans outside the wall. Now they are used as offense in the war against humans who choose the Titan's side. The Garrison Regiment is used for defense against them, along with defending the wall. Military Police handles catching them and throwing them in jail, or killing them.

Each Regiment is split into big two groups. Ones who fight against the Titans and ones who fight against the traiters. Me(Armin), Eren, Mikasa, and Levi and his elite team choose to fight against the traiters.

Me, Eren, Levi, Mikasa, and a few others took the mission of getting two of our best soldiers back. They were to be put on Levi's elite team once they got there memories back, since he lost his entire team. We were on it as well, Mikasa because she's 2nd best Cadet, Eren because he's half Titan, and me because of my intelligence. Then Leena and Chrystal will make the ultimate team, or so that's the plan.

We have a plan to get there memories, a potion and another, both palns created by me, so of course they have flaws, but hopefully they will work, if it doesn't we don't have another plan or way to get their memories back.

If this doesn't work, there stuck without their memories…and we cant aford for that to happen.

"Yeah. That's them." I responded.

"You sure, Armin. We cant afford to be wrong about this." Eren asked.

"Yes, I never forget their faces. I have perfect memory, part of what makes me so smart." I told them

"Ok but if-" Eren was cut off.

"He's not wrong, I trust him so we'll go in when we get a chance. Now wait for my signal, for now make sure its ready." Levi said confidently like he always did. I didn't know how he could be so confident in every decision he makes. I never am, never will be.

                              *Later….Chrystal's POV*

"Can we go in the woods now?" Leena asked. I was tired of her begging and whining she was never like this, it was weird.

"In a little bit. Lets eat first. What is with you today. You are completely out of character." I told her walking off the track an onto the field in the middle.

"I don't know, I just feel different." Leena said following me.

"Whatever." I said dismissing it, which I probably shouldn't have done, and regretted later.

Then something happened that changed my entire life…..

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