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We Will Change it All

By Kiersten Helle

Humor / Adventure

Chapter 1

Hey guys! This is my first story and I fixed this first chapter so I hope you all enjoy this and I hope you will be entertained!

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto!


Reading the Future

It was of course a normal day in Konoha like always and some were happier than others. The team seven group's sensei Minato Namikaze was going to visit his girlfriend for a date though he also had training for his students.

Which of course he forgot to call off. So he just headed over to Ichiraku's for his date.


Kakashi, and Rin were standing at their training grounds waiting for their Sensei and Obito to arrive. "Obito is usually late but sensei is rarely late..." Rin began.

Then in the distance they heard a familiar Uchiha's yells and turned to see Obito out of breath and running towards them. When he finally made he looked around confusingly "Eh? Where's Minato-sensei?"

They all shrugged and started thinking... well except for Kakashi, he honestly couldn't care less. Finally Rin took her hands and pounded one into the other "Oh yeah! How could I forget, Minato-sensei mentioned something about having a date with Kushina-san!"

"So we've been wasting our time here." Kakashi deadpanned.

"Yeah pretty much..." she replied.

It was silent for a minute until Obito just said "Who wants to go spy on them?" and almost immediatly replied.

"I'm in."

"Hn."

And with that they walked toward their favorite ramen stand.


The Uchiha's were being the same as everyday... emtionless, cold, and grumpy. Well except for one specific lady and that was Mikoto Uchiha the wife of Fugaku Uchiha the head of the Uchiha clan.

She was currently playing with her son Itachi and thinking about something very serious to her. She was currently thinking about babies. And she wanted another child. She wasn't pregnant yet.

She thought to herself what she would want the names to be, she decided if she does get pregnant, if it was a girl she would want the name to be Satsuki but, if it was a boy she wanted the name to be Sasuke.

Fugaku was away at a meeting and she wondered what he would think of having another child.


It was pretty much the same with the Hyuuga's, except for of course the clan heads wife Hitomi. Hiashi too, was at a clan meeting and she was by herself with the servants of the side branch.

She like most people thought that the side branch wasn't right and they should just get rid of it, but of course they wouldn't listen to her. She was knitting and a servant was walking around cleaning and sweeping here and there.

"Hitomi-sama, would you like anything to drink?" he said on one knee in front of her.

"*sigh* Mako, just address me as you would a friend and also stop with being a servant with me."

"B-bu-"

"No buts, please just do it."

He hesitated but got a soft grin and nodded. She herself grew a soft smile and nodded.

"You know Hitomi-san... I hope if you have a child they will be as kind as you are."

Hitomi grew flustered and nodded and grinned having the same wish as the man did. She just hoped none of her children got Hiashi's attitude. She went back to knitting and the man cleaning.


Jiraiya I don't even have to type about because you know what he is doing. And unfortunately Tsunade was right there watching him...


Sarutobi was in his office filling out his papers and felt a shiver up his spine "Oh my poor student..." and continued.


The three students were stalking their teacher and his girlfriend eating ramen together and throwing a few kisses and giggle like a normal healthy couple would do. Obito finally had enough of the mushy stuff and walked up to the ramen stand the two behind him following him.

"Oh! Uh hi.. sensei! I didn't expect you to be here!" Obito said awkwardly.

Everyone sweat dropped and thought 'Obito you suck at lying.'


Kushina had close to nine bowls beside her and Minato had two and almost done with his third one. They each loved ramen and could eat it forever. But. . loved ramen more than the Uzumaki's. Back in the Whirlpool village when Kushina was there before it was destoyed they had close to 30 ramen stands. And practically in all stores if you went to one they usually had nothing but stuff to make ramen there.

They all had their jokes and were getting ready to finish their last bowls and a figure in the distance with a hood over them were watching and said something that seemed like a jutsu but a spell at the same time and with that a large light flashed through the village.


"Ow get off you all way a ton!"

"Jiraiya you touch me there one more time I Will kill you and your perverted ass."

"Eek!"

"Fuuuckk my head!"

"Jiraiya hands off!"

"You pervert!"

"Well sorry laidies!"

When they all got situated they all looked like shit. Frizzy hair clothes screwed up and they laughed at each other and fixed their clothes. The men in the room immediately turned serious and were looking around. The room was pitch black but somehow had a dim light in it but, there were no lamps or anything they could just see.

There was a couch and a table but that was all.

"Hiashi activate your Byakugan and see if there is any chakra."

"You don't need to tell me that twice."

As he was looking everyone was searching for their kunai's and other weapons but they were left with nothing except their clothes they were wearing. Once they were finished searching they heard Hiashi grunt.

"There is no source of chakra anywhere at all..." Everyone went silent and they suddenly heard a click. They turned their heads and saw the wall opening but that just meant that there was a door on the outside but not the inside. Then everyone went infront of the women and kids. and went in a taijutsu stance. But in walked two people.

There was a women that had beautiful features, she had chestnut brown hair and Mist blue eyes, not bright blue eyes but misty cloudy one. Her outfit was a black gown that went just below the knees with ruffles on them and she was barefoot. The man wore a suit for some odd reason but he was very handsome he had emerald eyes and dirty blond hair that went in different directions.

Jiraiya was grinning pervertedly at the woman in front of him…. and slightly drooling. That resulted in giving Jiraiya a good whack on his head forcing a dent in the ground. Minato kicked his foot up and brought it to the side in attempt to kick the man that just walked in, in the face. But somehow he stopped it just by raising his hand.

"Relax, Relax we aren't going to harm you at all we just need to change things that weren't meant to happen." The women said calmly. "Things that weren't meant to happen? What in the hell does that mean!?" Obito yelled.

"Obito language! " Mikoto yelled. "I will explain things only once, and I mean only once." The man said. In understanding everyone nodded. Though they kept their stance

"We have you all here because things in the future happen and we need it to stop. Some things that happen should not have happened at all and you all are here to change it. My name is Daiku and her name is Ringo. More people will be joining you soon ,but for now it is just you all. A book is there on the floor and the couch is for anyone to rest on. Now if you are hungry just say it and we will come and lead you to the kitchen."

He finsihed what he was saying. They still were not convinced at all but what could they do? "We shall leave for now we will see you soon." With that they vanished. "I have no idea what just happened." Fugaku said with a straight face. "There is only one thing we can do which is read I guess." Mikoto said. "Well who wants to read first!." Kushina yelled. "OH OH I do! I do!'' Obito yelled raising his hand like a kindergartener. Kushina slowly handed him the book. Nobody sat on the couch but they sat on the floor just in case someone had to lay down. "Well here we go!" he said excitedly.


Alright guys hope you enjoyed this!


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