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Focus On The Eyes


"All our souls are written in our eyes"

Fantasy / Adventure
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Today was another day of volunteer work I'm doing this summer.

To explain shortly, I have to give indications to the tourists who ask for them. Portugal is a place with high touristic activity, especially during summer.

I am fluent in many languages, so I'm that person who needs to do practically all the work. I did not sign up for this...

As the day passed by, I talked with a lot of different people. The last one I talked to, before leaving my 'work place', was a girl, around my age, her name was Hannah. By her accent I could immediately tell she was Australian, but she had a lot of Asian characteristics, she was really cute and pretty. We talked a lot, and even exchanged phone numbers and social media accounts. I promised that I would show her around after 'work'.

She stayed here for two months, at my house. She met some of my friends as we went to the beach together quite a lot. We became really close and I even decided to do something I haven't done before...

Tell her my secret.


So, yeah, I just decided to start a story. My audience may not be that big, but I'm here even for my smol cute ones ♥

This is the most random thing I'll ever write, but I just dreamed with this story line, if that's normal (I don't think so)

But anyways, please look forward for it.

And also check out my other story "Into the woods" which is still in process of writing.

And please vote, comment and share.

Thank you, for your attention!!! Lub ya

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