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un mundo confuso

By Jorge Sebastian

Adventure / Action


Un mundo confuso

Escribo esta historia, más para diversión teniendo en cuenta el creciente número de historias tristes o dramáticas, pienso que esta sería un buen cambio, no se preocupen que mi primera prioridad seguirá siendo el Deber de Humphrey, disfruten


Las manadas llevaban un mes desde que el matrimonio de Garth y Lilly unieron las manadas poco después también tuvo lugar el matrimonio de Kate y Humphrey

Era una noche normal en Jasper, cuando de repente varios extraños portales se abrieron por todo el territorio de las manadas unidas, llevándose a varios lobos a un extraño universo alternativo, donde cada uno se vio afectado de diferentes maneras, esta historia, es sobre las aventuras que vivirán en ese extraño mundo, y como intentaran volver a su propio universo

Iniciamos con un lobo de pelaje rojo, dormía plácidamente, junto a su compañera de pelaje blanco, cuando de repente el portal lo traslado a una enorme mansión, con un laboratorio subterráneo, lleno de armaduras de alta tecnología, Garth apenas se inmutó y se dio vuelta aun dormido

Lilly por otra parte fue llevada a otra mansión, que en la parte inferior tenía un cuartel, y en la entrada tenía un X

Tony, fue enviado a una casa normal, pero tenía un anillo verde en uno de sus dedos

Winston por su lado ahora estaba en medio del Ártico, dentro de una gran fortaleza hecha de cristales

Eve, ahora estaba en una pequeña casa, en donde había un laboratorio improvisado, donde había notas sobre radiación gama

Hutch, ahora tenía una armadura de alta tecnología de color verde oscuro, y se encontraba en una nave espacial, clase fragata, que orbita la tierra

Candu, ahora tenía una armadura ligera encima, y junto a el yacía un martillo

Salty, estaba en una casa común y corriente, pero con un gran laboratorio lleno de gran tecnología, también su cabeza era más grande, y tenía un peinado de remolino

Mooch, ahora estaba en un templo, usando una túnica café, y al lado de, él tenía una especie de sable

Shakey, ahora estaba en una casa común y corriente, pero tenía algo muy especial en su muñeca, como una especie de reloj, pero no era de este mundo

Kate, ahora estaba en una mansión llena de objetos místicos muy poderosos

Humphrey, ahora estaba una pequeña casa en una montaña, usando una ropa naranja, con una camisa azul, que era inusualmente pesada, también había un báculo de color rojo, al lado de el

¿Dónde fueron enviados?, ¿podrán regresar?, ¿podrán reencontrarse?, ¿Qué será lo que le sucedió a cada uno?, sigan leyendo para averiguarlo, escriban reseñas de cómo les parece esta nueva historia, sé que es un poco corto el capítulo, pero es solo porque es la introducción.

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