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A Lunar Love Story

By Danny Sammons

Adventure / Romance

The Change

Into

On a warm day a lonely brony was watching an episode of My Little Pony by himself. He didn’t know it yet, but it would soon be his lucky day. It would be the day that he became part of their world. He would become very important in their lives. Especially one very important pony in particular. Soon his boring and lonely human life would end, only to start one of happiness and love.


Chapter 1

  “Ok time to watch the new episodes!” Dan was sitting at home alone as usual.  He was sitting on his couch in his apartment. He was watching his favorite show on his TV. Alone. He was 21 and had no one to care for. He had friends but that wasn’t enough for him. He wanted someone to call his own. Someone to love and care for. But he didn’t and so he wasted his time on internet. Drowning his sorrows in Equestria, spending his time with twilight and her friends. His favorite episodes were those dealing with Nightmare Moon and Luna.

  Dan was smitten with Luna even though she was a pony, and only part of a TV show. He found her beautiful and cute, and reminded of himself when it came to having a dark side. He saw how she felt as Nightmare Moon and knew how she felt. Just like Luna he loved the night. He hated being out in the sun. He thought it was too bright and burned his skin with no mercy. Unlike the moon that was calm and cool, and always made him smile when he saw it.

  So Dan sat there watching the new episodes of season three unaware of what was going on in his apartment. He was unaware of what was going to happen to him. Dan was glued to the TV when he heard a voice. Dan jumped up and turned around, only to see no one was there. “What a pity. Home alone once again, hey sport? To bad you can’t get away. Go meet new friends, maybe even someone to care for. Oh but wait, you can! All you have to do is leave this place forever. Follow my voice into this and you will be free to do as you wish.” With that a portal opened in front of Dan.

  It was purplish in color, and large enough that Dan could easily fit. It swirled like a pot of stew just within arm’s reach. “So what will you do? Stay here and live a boring existence, or join me for some chaos?” That was when Dan realized who’s voice he was hearing. “Discord?!” Dan asked in disbelief. “HAHA You are smarter than you look! So what will it be?” Dan hesitated for only a moment. ‘If it is live here or join the ponies, then see ya later humans!’ Dan jumped through the portal without looking back.

  Dan fell into a purple abyss. He kept falling, until he felt his body start to ach. Then he looked down to see his fingers were starting to retract. They were disappearing, to be replaced by hooves! He could feel all the changes happen as he was changed from human to pony. His ears grew long and pointed, he grew a muzzle instead of a face, he felt a tail starting to jut out of his butt, and his hair grow into a main. The process was painful enough to make Dan pass out right before he landed in Equestria. Dan laid passed out in sweet apple acres. But he was no longer a human, but a pony.


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