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Random Pre-Story Talking, Abridged Version

By LDStories

Drama / Humor

Craziness just started

Jay: Hi Guys!

Hanna: We're back!

Janet: And were better than ever!

Kai: *Punches Cole in the face*

Cole: OW!

Kai: Ha Ha Ha

Cole: Take that! *Uses the Scythe of Vultures on Kai*

Kai: You broke my leg!

Nya: XD

Zane: Quick take him to the hospital!

Sensei Wu: There's a tea th-

Rosalie: No time for that! Kai broke his leg and you're still talking about tea?

Garmy: *Sigh* -.-'

Sensei Wu: I heard that brother!

Skales: Can we pleassse get on with the ssstory?

Claudia: Okay but first…

Karina: WE DON'T OWN NINJAGO BUT WE OWN THE OCS AND THE PLOT

Jay: Jeez you didn't have to shout! o.0

Karina: Well SORRY!

Cole: /)_

Claudia: WELL, I WANTED TO SAY THAT THIS STORY TAKES PLACE BEFORE REBOOTED, SO THERE ISN'T PIXAL!

Christy: *squeak* 0.0

Nya: …

Zane: Who's Pixal?

Us: NOBODY!

Ninjas and Kunoichi: Kay… :L

Claudia: Now we really need to start…. And take Kai to the hospital.

Kai: FINEEEEE… Ouch!

Zane: Okay just take him to the hospital…

*BEE BO BEE BOOOOOOOOOO*

Kai: Noooo! Batman doesn't end like this!

Jay: Dude your not batman.

Kai: Really? *In hospital bed, which was surprisingly comfy*

Cole: Yup

Nya (muttering): Me and my stupid brother… *getting into hospital car (relatives only :P)*

Us: SHUT UP!

Ninja and Kunoichi: Okay, okay! *holds hands up in defeat while getting driven away by hospital car*

*Christy starts singing*

Christy: My little pony, your hair is freaky, *points at Kai's gelled hair*

Nya: XD

Lloyd: Kay…. (Notice he hasn't been talking the whole time)

Us: ROLL WITH THE STORY ALREADY! WHERES THE CAMERA MAN?Camera man: On live in 3-

Zane: Aren't we writing a fic? Not a video?

Us: Oh sorry we meant the upload button

Camera man: Aww…. :(

Lloyd: :L

Upload button: 3, 2 ,1...

Everyone (including batman and da doctors and da senseis and da ninjas and da kunoichi and da authors and da snakes and da editor, Gloria): REVIEW!

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