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I'm Free

By bella1997

Other / Scifi

Chapter 1

Evreybody was at First Resistance Base when suddenly they all heard a familiar voice. "Stop what you're doing and come outside" it said they were all in a trance as they walked outside where they saw a white light "It's beautiful said Luke 'It really is 'Finn added. after a moment a shape began to emerge from the light it was Han Solo he was glowing. He was smiling and he looked happy. 'Han" Leia barley voiced out 'Surprise" he said playfully How'? Han chuckled "after what happened I went to this place. 'I didn't know where I was but I knew that I was safe, that no one could hurt me anymore. I was happy ". ''What did you see?" asked Poe "''I saw a garden children were playing they were laughing and smiling it was so peaceful. Han then looked at Leia. 'I saw our son but he was a boy again.He kept wanting me to play tag with him. they were all crying now. "I didn't want things to be this way but it's okay now" 'I never left and I never will" 'I watched all of you evrey day and I will continue to do so until you also come to this place. Han sighed 'I will always be with you, "Like the force? said yeah Luke like the 'Force'. Evreyone took turns hugging him. when it was Luke's turn he said "Han this is all my fault" what? 'If I hadn't trained him he would not have done this" Han embraced him 'It's not your fault he said Patting his back" "Don't ever say such things Okay? Luke nodded Han took a step towards Chewie who gave little yelps of joy and embraced his Co-Pilot 'Don't go" Chewie begged "I'm sorry pal I have to" Han replied" But I'll check in occasionally I promise" Han then turned to Leia 'Oh my god" she said and they proceeded to make out Han's hand on her waist. after about 3 minutes they pulled apart. "Leia if Ben comes back to the light side you have to forgive him for me" Leia put her hands on his face" I will Okay the light started to appear again' I have to go said Han stepping toward it" Until I come again may the force be with you all" Han blew them a kiss before the light went away. 'I'm worried about you said Chewie and Han's voice faintly replied 'You don't have to be pal'

I'm Happy"

I'm Safe

I'm free

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