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Ultimate Star Wars Episode 1: the New Hope

By Joker

Action / Fantasy

Prologue

A Long time ago, in a Galaxy far far away...

Ultimate Star Wars

Episode 1:

A New Hope

A New threat has risen throughout the galaxy, as the Order of the sith, or the Galactic Empire, have taken full control of the galaxy. The Empire is searching for any Rebel or Old republic forces throughout the galaxy, as the Empire wishes to maintain order. The Emperor however, begins to fear of a prophecy that might just come true as it tells of a child of a once powerful jedi defeating him. The emperor has ordered a search for this child as Imperial forces scatter through out the galaxy, including one very far away from the original galaxy. It is on the Planet Earth that the child of the once powerful jedi resides as she has no clue that she will become the galaxies savior from the Evil Galactic Empire...


Earth's solar System

The Imperial star Destroyer, the Hunter, arrives in Earth's Solar System as a patrol of tie fighters flies around it. Inside the bridge is the Admiral of the ship, Admiral John Williams, as he looks on through the window of the bridge. An Imperial Officer approaches him as he salutes him and says, "Admiral, we have received a message from our scouts." The Admiral turned towards the officer as he says, "Excellent, what do they have to report?" The Officer lowered his hand and put his arms behind his back as he answered, "They have reported a planet sir, a planet with life on it." The Admiral gave the officer an intrigued expression as says, "that is excellent news as we've had some terrible luck with these lifeless planets, so what is the planet called?" The officer then takes out a hologram as he shows him a hologram of the planet as he answered, "Earth sir, the planet is called Earth." The Admiral was very impressed that this was the only planet with life on it and was very curious about it. The Admiral then cleared his throat as he says, "Well done, I will report this to Lord Maul immediately."

The Admiral then left the bridge as he went down a hallway, as he stopped in front of a door and took a deep breath. the Admiral then entered the room as he saw a man in a dark robe meditating as the Admiral says, "Lord Maul I have some excellent news." Maul didn't turn around, but he asked the Admiral, "What is it Admiral?" The Admiral was a bit nervous but at the same time confident about his report, as he answered, "Our scouts found a planet with life sir, a planet called Earth." Maul raised his head, as he stood up, turned towards the Admiral, and approached him as he said, "Excellent work Admiral, we are now one step closer to finding this child." The Admiral stared at the sith lord curiously as he asked, "Sir, what if she isn't on the planet?" Maul then took his hood off to reveal that he is a zabrak with a red skin tone with black markings, as he answers to the admiral coldly, "Then you will pay the price for it Admiral, send a detachment to that planet and search all over it, you are dismissed admiral." The admiral nodded his head as he says, "Yes lord Maul." The admiral then left to follow his orders, as Maul put his hood back on and meditated some more.


Earth: America: Shelbyville, Tennesee

A young girl is in bed, as her alarm starts blaring away as it's eight o'clock in the morning. The young girl turns her alarm off, as she starts yawning and then says to herself, "Well here comes another pointless day at work." The young girl then gets out of bed and enters the bathroom as she plans on taking a shower. After taking a shower, the young girl exits the bathroom and gets dressed for work as she enters the kitchen to see her mother cooking breakfast as she says to her, "Good morning Aranza." Aranza sat on the table as she put her hands on her face as her mom approached her and asks, "Ready for work today?" Aranza shook her head as she replied, "Not really mom, been having a rough week lately." Aranza's mom gave Aranza a plate off eggs and sausage, as she says to her, "Well i'm sure you'll have a good day today, besides anything can happen." Aranza then slightly nodded her head as she took a bite from her sausage. After eating her breakfast, Aranza exited her house as she got in her car and drove to work, little did she know that she was being followed by two dark jedi scouts.

Aranza arrives at her work, La Hacienda, as she enters the mexican restaurant as she says to her boss, "sorry i'm late." Her boss looked at her as he says, "don't worry about it, you have someone waiting for you anyway." Aranza then grabbed her pad as she walked over to a table, where a young man has his face covered with a menu as she asks him, "How can I help you sir?" The young man lowered his menu as he answers, "How about a glass of Sweet Tea Aranza." Aranza smiled at this, as she says, "Hey bobby, what brings you back to Shelbyville?" Bobby smiled back as he says, "I was called in to do some business, figured I come visit you at your work first." Aranza looked over at the kitchen, as she says, "I have to get back to work, I'll talk to you later tonight." Bobby nodded his head, as Aranza went back into the kitchen.

A Few hours later...

La Hacienda's business begins to slow down as it's almost closing time, as Aranza is sitting with Bobby as she says, "It's good to see you again Bobby, it's been at least a few months since you've been gone." bobby took a sip of his sweet tea as he says, "When your living on your own without any family, you have to make some decisions especially difficult ones." Aranza nodded her head in agreement as she says, "You didn't have to live like that if you would have accepted my mom's offer to be adopted into the family." Bobby scoffed a bit, as he says, "Maybe, but I've always grown up to be a loner, besides my destiny probably doesn't need to involve family." Aranza looked away a bit, till she turned her head back and asked, "I always wanted to ask you this bobby, do you think I have a destiny?" Bobby stared at Aranza curiously as he answers, "Yeah of course we all have one, why?"

Aranza stood up as she walked towards a window as she answers, "I just feel like I have no destiny or even a future in this world, you know it's like all I'll ever be is a nobody." Bobby then stood up and turned aranza around as he says to her, "Aranza, I have known you since you were 6 and I tell you this, you are not a nobody, you have a future, you have a destiny, it just hasn't happened yet." Aranza looked back at the window and then back at Bobby as she asks, "Promise?" Bobby gave Aranza a smile as he answers, "promise." Aranza then gives Bobby a hug, as bobby hugs her back.

Meanwhile, the two dark jedi scouts had been watching the events that transpired as one of them reports, "Admiral, we might have found the child." "How do you know of this?" The dark jedi begins to feel a presence of the force from both Aranza and Bobby, but the most is coming from Aranza as he answers, "Because I feel a powerful presence from the girl, it's like none I ever felt before." Excellent then, bring the girl to us alive." The dark jedi then looked over to see Bobby staring out the window and then walking away as the dark jedi asks, "What about the boy that seems to be protecting her?" "Kill him, we cannot let him get in the way." The dark jedi looked at his companion as he says, "as you wish admiral." The other dark jedi then says, "I'll let the others know, we'll attack as soon as she's by herself."


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