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Journey to Restore Noonvale

By InFamousKiller27

Fantasy / Adventure

Redwall Abbey Prologue

Redwall Abbey

Fall of Noonvale


Inside Redwall lies an Abbey and in a room where a large tapersty of history and Martin the Warrior also another stands near him known as Matthias the Warrior and a white mouse stands next to the cloth who is looking at the warriors the mouse is known as John Churchmouse and was holding a book that has a red rose on the front in he's arm.

"the great warriors of Redwall who were great defenders, Martin the Warrior you maybe like to hear this story its about Noonvale" John said as he walks to the bookstand and places the book and opens it and begins.

"It began 3 seasons when Martin left Noonvale and has been moved to a place at the mountain and where lies a city of Noonvale it was a city of beauty and many mouse in the shops and children were playing and play fight with wooden swords and soldiers inside the city known as Noonvale Archers they armor was strong from the great mines of Noonvale which is at the side of the city it was also like a stronghold they also lies a King of Noonvale and soldiers on the walls also inside the stronghold lies a great mine of where you can see gold run like a river also the miners dig deeper and forges the great armor and weapons also where they find gems they examine them, they dig deep where they find diamond, ruby and sapphire until there was where they found it"

The mouse digs though the rock see a strange glow he got closer and peels the rocks off it and takes it in he's hands.

"the heart of the mountain, the Arkenstone"

As John turns to the next page.

"The King of Noonvale has it in placed on top of he's throne, the people of Noonvale and him took it as a sign of hope, but also some others were to know the great mouses known as the Sacred Order who was also trusted to the King of Noonvale"

As the mouse's of the Sacred Order walks to the throne.

"much thing's began to change that day the night became more dark and the King knew that something might happen but the people weren't suspicious of the King the people say a sickness was growing within him it was a sickness of the mind and where sickness thrives bad things will follow"

at the Next Day they were flying kites in the sky in the city but the wind began to become stronger for some reason and trees from the north that were near the mountain began to blew off.

"they first heard was a noise like a hurricane coming down the left side mountain, trees creeked and cracked thoughout the dry wind"

The people and archers were looking over the wind then the Captain came up to the wall and look for the source of the wind.

"Archer sound the alarm" Captain said as a small bit of wood flys though and they ducked.

"do it now!" he said as he moves back in to worn the others.

"What is it Sir?" Archer said.

"Dragon!" the Captain said thoughout the fort in the mountain and they began running and the trees were coming down from the mountain were on fire and the Archer saw the Dragon breathing fire out and before it can hit him the Captain got the Archer out of its range and behind the piller.

"It was a Fire Drake from the North, Smaug had come.

The Dragon flys to the city and burns the kites and begins to burn the city at everycorner and building, they began to ring the bells so the people can focus on get out of the city the Noonvale Archers in the city tried to shoot the Dragon but the fire hits them first but some were to leave the city along with the people.

Such rot and death was dealt that day, But the city was nothing to Smaug he's eye was set on another prize.

The Captain was in front the small army of Noonvale Swordsmen and Spearmen in a sqaure formation and they stopped in front of the front and he stands ready with he's sword.

"Smaug was within a Dark and Fearcus Armor.

The King of Noonvale stands on the throne and press a button on it and releases the Arkenstone he catches it and panics about the Dragon.

The Dragon almost breaks down the gate and the army were in a bit of a panic as the gate breaks up into bits.

"Stand your Ground" The Captain says as the Dragon comes though and press forward and clawing away the Spearmen and Swordsmen the Dragon stumped through the stronghold.

The King looks in front of him and saw the Dragon on the gold and the flapping the wings, The King loses balance and drops the Arkenstone and it drops into the gold that is flying everywhere.

"Noo!" The King yells as he tries to get it back the Captain got in front of him and pulls him out of the halls and outside.

"Noonvale was lost, The Dragon will guard he's plunder as long as he lives"

The people inside the stronghold were to join the people that left the city one of the Captain yells to run and over the right side hill the King of the Sacred Order and he's army stops as they saw the fires everywhere and in the city.

"Help us!" The King yells at the Sacred Order for help, The King of Sacred Order saw him in rising panic but before The King can hope from help from them, The Sacred Order twist they heads around returns back to Noonvale Forest.

"the Lord of the Sacred Order would not risk the lives of he's kin"

The King saw them turn back then he got angry as he joins the group of people that left Noonvale they travel to another place they know on the other side of the left side hill where they know the Dragon did not come from.

"no help came from the Sacred Order or anyone else the people and The King were scatted and will never forgive and forgot.

John closes the book about Noonvale and looks at Martin on the tapersty.

"and that is how it was but Matthias and he's son were to reclaim Noonvale, and this is how the Journey begins" John said as he leaves the room.

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