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Jasper succeeds

By Elyshia

Action / Romance

Intro

We all know I don't own twilight, though I have used some sentences straight from the book (New Moon in this case). Anything not written by me is in italics. Enjoy.

Intro:

BPOV:

I took the little package, rolling my eyes at Edward while I stuck my finger under the edge of the paper and jerked it under the tape.

"Shoot," I muttered when the paper sliced my finger; I pulled it out to examine the damage. A single drop of blood oozed from the tiny cut.

It all happened very quickly then

"No!" Edward roared.

He threw himself at me. Everything moved to fast for my mind to process. I thought Edward had collided with me, flinging me back across the table. I felt pain from hands as glass cut into my skin. This was out ruled by sharp pain at my neck. I looked up to see Edward and Emmett struggling to hold Jasper back, his wild, empty eyes focused only on me.

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