{{ contest.story_page_sticky_bar_text }} Be the first to recommend this story.
Get Free Copy

100 free copies left

This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.

0
Free copies left
You can choose from our best books below
AlmandaMalfoy would love your feedback! Got a few minutes to write a review?
Write a Review

Fandom Story - It's only just the begining

By AlmandaMalfoy

Other / Fantasy

Chp1- Amanda Bane

Dear Diary,

Everything seemed so peaceful, it seemed that whenever Katrina’s around everything will be fine but then came the news. It was a fine Sunday when Mom’s approval letter came, it means Mom’s promotion letter has been accepted, to promote her company, to get a higher rate of work,to take more time taken in work than taking care of her daughter, most importantly, it means I have no more time for friends. That night I hesitated if it was right to call Katrina, it was hard telling her, Katrina really liked hanging out with me,and of course i liked it too. However, Katrina called me first. “Hey, Kat.” I said softly, “Wuzzup, Amanda?” Her joyful voice came over the phone. “I have something to tell you, Kat.” I can already imagine Katrina sobbing in a distance. “Wait up, you know that my dad’s going to work in your mom’s company right?” Katrina said as her voice leaped from her usual tone to a high pitch. “WHAT?” I yelled as I try wake myself from this dream but nope, this isn’t a dream. I wouldn’t be actually surprised if Katrina’s dad or my mom made such a decision, Katrina’s dad is a total genius, so is my mom, my mom is the one who made the company ‘Magik’, not the super hero. She believe that she could bring new technology that appears like magic which brings us a better life comparing to the 21st century. For a normal human being, that is impossible, not even close to our faintest imaginations, but my mom’s brain is like made mechanical engines, she is like a computer, smart, humorous and intelligent. My dad’s a billionaire, he is the famous Mr. Bane, both of my parents never get the time to take care of me and died when I was two, so I was raised by my nanny, Granny Jo Jo. Well, back to the main point, Katrina and I can now meet even more than usual ! I am just so thrilled!

Then Katrina and I talked a lot about tomorrow, it was opening day of the Silver Leaf High School. My school is filled with bullies and geeks and geniuses all in one, it’s basically ‘High school without the musical.’ “Hey Manda, look’n good!” said a deeper grown voice. The voice came from James, my older brother, his shaggy brown hair brushed down his cheeky red face. “Hi, James.” I said as i hugged my long never seen brother. James is older than me by one years, he loves the hunger games, he just went to England for studying English Literature. Just like me, James and I want to be authors when I grow up. I greeted James as I joined Katrina to our classroom, Katrina blushed as she greeted James. I gave an wicked smirk at James and walked away to the cafeteria. “HEY AMANDA!” A shout ran across the hall, Chann Clearwater came along, Chann and Katrina are my best friends, they supported me in everything since we were in Kindergarten, Chann has a younger sister- Sarah Clearwater, she’s as old as me and she’s a brilliant swimmer. Even though, I never saw Sarah, she has always been an idol of Katrina and me.

As I walked in the Cafeteria, Katrina and I were still chatting about Sarah, suddenly I stopped cold, there a saw him , Jack Starling, the insufferable know-it-all, the boy who always raised his hand faster than me, and everybody thinks that HE’S THE WALKING ENCYCLOPEDIA! That’s just unacceptable, Jack Starling is nothing but a lazy, rude, boastful know-it-all! Katrina catches my eye and pulled my eye away from him, ” Hey Manda, we’re gonna get your revenge later, focus on the time!” she said and pulled me up to the stairs that reached to our classroom.

Later on Katrina and I were talking about how awesome would it be if our school was Hogwarts, you know, moving stairs, apparate through classrooms so we don’t have to walk endlessly. “Hey, what are you going to do in lunch?” Katrina tapped my shoulders after the History class. “Revise, revise and revise and-” “Do you have something other than that to do?” “Yeah, Revise!” I replied idly.

Later on, I soon found my self in the cafeteria with a huge stack of books. “Hey there, Nerd. Need help?” Jack Starling sneered, as he walked up, the cafeteria was crowded with geniuses, geeks, and day dreamers from every class. “Amanda!” Katrina shouted nearby, I found my chance to ignore my conversation with Jack Starling, I didn’t mean to ignore him or cautiously avoid him, he is just so annoying!

Hey gotta go now, Best wishes,

Harry Potter FAN 4 EVER,

Amanda Bane


Continue Reading Next Chapter
Further Recommendations

Stephen Warner: To start off, I am thoroughly impressed. The writing style is somewhat unique, and the plot seemed to move at a nice and steady pace. However, I was not expecting this to be a vampire book! I am usually not one for novels about vampires, but I was pleasantly surprised! You wrote with such grace a...

Alisha Banks: You have me hooked! I immediately upon finishing the first book had to start the second. It is a captivating story and I can't wait to finish the other two book! I will definitely be recommending this book to others to read!

littlebunnypoopoos: Omg this was so amazing! The ending was a little bad and predictable. But otherwise, I need a second book or I'll die :DThe character development was excellent and the whole romance, action, and suspense was superb

Megan King: This book is absolutely amazing, it kept me on my toes through the entire book. I hope there is a second book. I would 10 out of 10 recommend this for anyone who loves fantasy, action or romance because it is full of all three 💕

LeahWrites: I love your use of writer's craft and how you use figurative language to enhance your writing. It great how you didn't have any spelling or grammar issues.

Althea Kerr: This is a tale that is all too familiar to South African readers having lived through a war era on our borders and beyond. It is obviously autobiographical as the mind under duress is so detailed and real. It has fantastic suspense if a bit disjointed - perhaps that is the fear and loneliness com...

JWalker: I loved this story from start to finish! It flows at a really nice pace and the story world feels so real. The fight sequences are a treat especially when Isanfyre is training to become a warrior. I found the names really cool and thankfully easy to pronounce. Personally I have always struggled w...

Sara Grover: Being that this is your first story and I assume first draft, a lot of little mistakes are common, we all have made them; little things like your instead of you're, missed capitalization, missing punctuation, etc.As for the plot, I have a lot of questions and I did leave comments on certain secti...

ynez2005: I LOVE THIS BOOK SOOOOO MUCH!!!!Though you really need to make another book,more Princesses!!! Whoooo!!!Girl Power!!!Mabey it could even be Devona's BFF???That would make it even better!!!Plus can you pleeease make Akki come back,together with Thea and Authur amd the whole family is back!Other th...

More Recommendations

sujitha nair: What's so distinct about this story was that it could easily be real.Praveena can be your classmate, neighbor or that girl you saw at the coffee shop today. The important decisions she makes and the dilemmas she faces, remind us of our own twisted lives.

Alex Rushmer: This was not what I expected, but I enjoyed it a lot Malfoy was always one of the characters that I liked a lot, so I like that a lot of this happens between him and Colette. I read the first couple chapters, and I enjoyed your writing style and am excited to see where you take this story. My com...

spooky jedi: Love your story!I really hope more people read this story!Its amazing!! The plot is very unique and different, which is very good to have in a world full of stories. You have very complex and intellectual plot line, with your many loveable character and that hint of 'will they, won't they' is ju...

Alani Foreigner: I absolutely loved how you created this story. It isn't like the other cliché stories I've ever read. I had just started reading it yesterday and just had to finish it. The main characters are grotesquely awesome and I fell in love with them. If you're into fantasy and stuff I can guarantee that ...

OpheliaJones: This story took a different kind of spin on the "normal girl lives with definitely not normal guy" plot. The plot points of Frey's father, Liam's family, and Frey's view of Liam's world were good to read. She did not fall in love with him in the first couple weeks. Their lives were not smooth in ...

Marijana1: The melancholy present throughout this story has the power to influence and etch into the minds of the readers, to stay there and refuse to leave even after they have finished reading the story. This is a deep, powerful story, making the readers wonder about everything – about love, about their e...

About Us:

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.