Get Free Copy

100 free copies left

This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.

0
Free copy left
You can read our best books
JacobLautner would love your feedback! Got a few minutes to write a review?
Write a Review

Twilight: The Dying Wish

By JacobLautner

Romance / Mystery

Prologue

                                                     Twilight

                                        The Dying Wish



Prologue:

Pain. That was what I'm feeling right now. Endless amount of Pain and Blood. I laid there in the pool of blood beneath my body. My own which is mixed with other people's blood too. There were screams around me. Screams of Pain. Both Physically and Emotionally. Screaming because of seeing the loved ones dying in front of their eyes. I could vaguely hear some sirens. But I couldn't be sure. My vision blurred and I could make out some grey chunks of what looked like a cauliflower scattered around me. My face went pale as sheet before turning slight green as I caught on what that grey chunks were. Pieces of Brain. Luckily it wasn't mine since I could think...though not clearly. My body was surrounded by people whom are laying there without hands, legs, heads and...lives.

There were sharp pieces of glass scattered all over the road glistening in the bright sun momentarily blinding me. I could feel them piercing deep into my body. Especially in my stomach. I could make out a totally mangled bus with a shattered front view glass and another bus -which carried innocent school children- was totally crumbled.

There were several bodies around me including the children whom still have an expression of terror and fear etched on their beautiful faces. Fear of being dying before they could start their own life. My eyes closed and images of my families flashed beneath my closed pale eyelids. My protective Mother....My naive Father...My over annoying older sister....My family...Everyone. Everyone whom I loved very much. It's true what they say...that you'll be seeing images of loved ones before dying. I never thought about dying in pain. Actually...I never thought about dying. So this is what it feels like to die? Its painful.

My closed eyes wrenched open in alarm as I heard whimpers coming beside me. Two whimpers exactly. My two best friends. Monika and Kaushalya. Whom are the very first best friends. Whom always loves me too much. Whom always protected me. Whom would do anything for me. And Vice versa.

I craned my neck with much difficulty and saw their eyes were tightly closed wishing the pain to go away. I managed to shift ignoring the sharp tug of pain in my stomach and clutched their hands. I smiled when I felt -numbly- their fingers curled around mine. I squeezed their hands and my smile widened when I felt the pressure being returned by both of them.

Even though I'm dying I could help but think about Jacob Black. A character in my my favorite novel. Twilight. You know the russet wolf Jacob Black? Yeah him.

I know it's stupid...but I fell in love with Jacob Black character. Like I said it's stupid. I first questioned my sanity when i realized this. As well as my friends. An image of him danced in front of my eyes. His thick shaggy eyebrows, his melting chocolate brown eyes that oddly resembles my own, his high cheekbones, his overly infectious smile that doesn't fail to make me smile whenever I see that, his sparkling teeth that shows when he smiles or laugh, his tan russet colored skin. Everything about him made me fall in love with him.

No, I didn't love him just because he is hot or sexy. I fell in love with his character. His love for his Dad, his love for the Bella Swan even after she left him to marry the Vampire Edward Cullen, his loyalty to his pack, his respect to elders, his sarcastic remarks, his tasteful jokes, his always brightening aura which he spreads around him without his knowledge. I fell in love with his eyes, I fell in love with his smile. Totally...I fell in love with him. Like Bella's line when she realized she is in love with Edward -Just minus Edward name- would suit me better.

I'm unconditionally and irrevocably in love with Jacob Black.

"I...I want to....live...my life....to the fullest....with my friends and.....Jacob Black" I whispered feeling stupid as I said the last par. Pfft. Like it could happen. But it wouldn't hurt to try right? Soooo.....I still tried. I know stupid right? "I want....to...live....with....him forever"

Like I said Stupid.

My heart tore and shattered when I felt my two best friend's life slipping away from their bodies. But they had this tight steel grip on my hand refusing to leave me. And I'm grateful for that. Soon my eyes started to droop and my heartbeat slowed down to uneven pounding. I couldn't even feel my own body. I know what's happening. It's time. Time for me to go. So I whispered those last words. They were very true and came from depth of my heart.

"I...Love....You...Jacob Black"

My eyes closed as soon as said that very true and meaningful words. My breath stopped as well as my heart. Few minutes later the bus exploded into flames consuming everything around it. Including Mine and my friend's bodies. At that moment my life as Avanthika has died. Vanishing abruptly from the existence. Vanishing immediately from the life I had led in these past Seventeen years. Dying along with my seventeen years best friends. Dying in content after whispering those heart warming words. Dying painfully about not knowing what Fate has stored for me and my friends.

Dying without knowing the power behind those Dying wish......


Hey guys! I'm Mana and this is my first ever story! I hope you like it! I had this idea inside my head for past few years and waited to the right time to implement it. Guess the time has come, huh?. Enjoy reading everyone!
~Mana



Write a Review Did you enjoy my story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, JacobLautner
Continue Reading
Further Recommendations

sunshinebennybear: First, I would like to address the elephant in the room. The author forgets her own character's names. She mixed up Liam for Jace, Harri for Maiya, and Freya for Clary. I love The Mortal Instruments as much as the next fangirl, but I find myself unforgiving about this. Throughout the story there ...

Jordan Young: *ALERT FOR POSSIBLE SPOILERS* Where to start? I don't know how to sum up this review, this story was absolutely sensational. Brilliant. Flawless. I loved every single bit of this story, it is truly amazing. I read this story in fifteen hours, it is magnificent. I loved everything about it, the p...

colt: i love your books! all of them! i am so happy for you! when i first read your book i thought "this seems really interesting" and i just got hooked had to have more, i wondered if you had a sequel to the first one, and you did, i was so excited that i had to start reading it. your series left me t...

Jenn Deering: This is a go-to story for when you're needing a little happiness in your life. It's well-crafted, and characters are true to their show-selves. The pace is right, there are minimal grammatical errors, and the plot is fresh.

LouiseJ2: I enjoyed the detail you went into with regards to the case. It made the UNSUB appear believable. The crisis in the middle of the story was my favorite part, very dramatic but not over the top. I feel like sometimes pairings can be overdone but I liked that some of the relationships were a little...

jessiehs: This was absolutely amazing. I loved how it went back and forth between perspectives. I actually cried at the end I was so happy. This was amazing. I can't even think of another word to describe it. Thank you for writing his.

Ruby0h: Overall I thought your story was really good! It drew me in right away and kept me interested as the story progressed. I loved the character of Kayla being inserted into this story, and the way she affected and shaped the life of the original story into something totally new and interesting. I lo...

263Adder: Okay so I adore this story. I only knocked one star off plot for historical inaccuracies because I'm a bit of a stickler for that. The ending broke my heart though, considering you already changed history couldn't you (SPOILER) change it a bit more and have them together!!!! I want an alternative...

GeorgeS: The author has a VERY refreshingly direct writing style. Sometimes being punched in the gut (or nose, as the case may be) can be an excellent thing, indeed. Whatever may be lacking in subtlety is more than made up for in the diamond clarity of character development. I look forward to MORE. I c...

This story wasn't for you ?
Look at our most viral stories!
King's Lament

FreakyPoet: "you made me laugh, made me cry, both are hard to do. I spent most of the night reading your story, captivated. This is why you get full stars from me. Thanks for the great story!"

The Cyneweard

Sara Joy Bailey: "Full of depth and life. The plot was thrilling. The author's style flows naturally and the reader can easily slip into the pages of the story. Very well done."

This story wasn't for you ?
Look at our most viral story!
Spectra

Ro-Ange Olson: "Loved it and couldn't put it down. I really hope there is a sequel. Well written and the plot really moves forward."