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Blue Elleils


Rule breaker from Dystopian community learns of governmnet secrets during a day at work and forms a group to help him take down the governmnent under the watchful eye of people with higher powers then they thought possible.

Scifi / Adventure
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​​​​Dear city 5,

The only way to deal with an unfree world is to become so ABSOLUTELY free that your very existence is an act of rebellion. It's both rebellion and conformity that attack you with success. Rebellion against tyrants is obedience to God. Help the Undergaurds restore order and life to our community, God be with us all.

-Diamond 02

10 Minutes

That's how long it took to change the entire lifestyle of five young adults and soon the whole community of Blue Elleils, after an uncontrolled act of rebellion, there were a few but many rules set in place by the government some 50 years ago that have made life in this community peaceful and running like clockwork. No adult openly questioned the government nor the rules, for they were simple.

1. No people can date anyone the government did not assign to them when they were young

2. People are not allowed out of their given cities unless they are working and must return by nightfall

3. People are given their jobs based on their skills as young trials

4. No drugs, alcohol, parties or meeting groups bigger than 4 unless they are inside their cores

5. No interracial couples (two different cities)

6. All people must stay in their cores at night

7. No people can have the same name in the same city

8. No adults are allowed to live longer than 60

9. All cores must have 2 families in them, to be connected by marriage in future unless told otherwise by govt

10. Trackers must stay on at all times

There is a three-strike system to the rules beside one rule, the unwritten one.......

You shall not question the government

That goes without exceptions, once the government feels that you are a danger in any way, you will be in danger. And like a dog, you will be put down, when the time is right. That is what happened to Diamond 02, and if they are not cautious, that is what will happen to our young heroes.

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