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A Trip To Remember

By ValEaton46

Humor

Chapter 1

We´re at my house packing my things while listening to music. I know for sure this trip is going to be fantastic. It would be more much better if the boys were there too.

“Yeah, that´s right” said Hermione “but Ron more”

“What?” I asked

“You were thinking out loud” said Astoria

I’m thinking out loud” Hermione and I sang together then bursted laughing

You may think we´re going to London or Rome or Paris because of the fantastic thing and all the joy and that we are all excited but no we´re going to DisneyWorld. Yeah we´re 17 and we´re happy of going to Disney but what can I say that´s the land were all the dreams come true and you make happy memories so...

“I still remember when they said it to us” said Hermione

Flashback

“We have something to tell you” said Professor Dumbledore “And… is because you got graduated”

“We got you a trip to…DISNEYWORLD” said McGonagall

“Really?” squealed Hermione

“That´s awesome” said Astoria in a sing song tone

“It will be a lot of fun” I said

“The flight will be at five o’clock so you have now and tomorrows morning to pack everything you need” said Professor Dumbledore

“Well we can do Astoria´s suitcase now and tomorrow the ones of Ginny and mines” said Hermione

“Yeah it´s fine but we do mine at the end so that we go to the airport from here” I said

“And why not after we do mine we go to Hermione´s and start he one of her then we have a sleepover and in the morning we finish it?” asked Astoria

“That´s fine with me” I said

“Yeah me too” said Hermione

“Okay then let´s go” said Astoria

End of Flashback

And now we´re here listening to our favorite music while packing.

“Okay Hermione since when do you like Ron” I said

“I don´t know since 3th, 4th grade maybe” she answered

“And what would you say if he asked you to be his girlfriend?” asked Astoria

“Maybe yes but I don’t think that’s going to happen ´cause he doesn´t like me” said Hermione very sure

“You´re wrong” I said while closing my suitcase “the other day I was talking with Harry and accidentally I said that you like Ron in that way” Hermione gave me a glare that if looks could kill I´ll be 6 feet under “and then he said that Ron likes you in that way too so it really can happen” I finished 

“Imagine that he tells you to meet him at Cinderella´s castle, then he arrives with your favorite character and a bouquet of your favorite flowers, then…”Hermione cut off Astoria

“How will he know which are my favorite flowers and who is my favorite character?” asked Hermione

“He can asks us or you when we tells you to meet him at the castle” I said

“Exactly… well anyways the he get in one knee, gives you the flowers and ask you to be his girlfriend and sings the chorus of cover girl, lost in love, and song for you from Big Time Rush. It will be so romantic”Astoria finished and I recorded it all because it´s the most romantic thing I have heard

“You´re hallucinating” said Hermione while rolling the eyes “ first it can´t be because the boys won´t be there and second besides it´s really romantic the boys don´t have enough brain to think of something like that” listed Hermione

“Yeah they’re so clueless” Astoria said

“Well, changing the topic what games do you want to ride from all 4 parks?” I asked

“I want to ride the Aerosmith rollercoaster, the Hollywood tower, the Everest Mountain, the splash mountain, the space…”

“Okay, we get it you want all the extremes” Astoria said cutting Hermione off “well I would like to ride the classical like dumbo, peter pan all of that” Astoria said

“I don’t know I think I’m going to ride every ride you do ´cause I don’t wanna miss any experience” I said

“Well if you´re doing that then I think I’m going to do it too” Astoria replied “you know ´cause neither you nor I like that kind of games”

“Yeah the only problem is most of the games are of two people and we´re three so…?” I said

“Well we can go like first I go alone, then you go alone, then Astoria go alone and then we start over” Hermione said

“Yeah, it´s fine with me” said Astoria while I nodded my head

I check the clock and realize it´s 3:30 “Well, let´s go if we don´t wanna be late” I said and we all went downstairs me carrying my suitcase to go to the airport.


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