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Angel's divergent

By AngelSmith

Romance / Action

Chapter 1 I'm what?

Angel's P.O.V

6 years ago...

Today is the day we take are aptitude test to see which faction we belong in. I want to leave this place not because I don't belong here in abnegation but also because my mother.

My mother's name is Emily Everton. She is the most cruelest person I have ever known. Just like Tobias's father Marcus Eaton. She was never like this when my father was alive. He died when he was on his way home when someone from the Factionless stabbed him in the heart to get the paper in his wallet even when he gave him the money.

That was eight years ago, ever since then she would call me names, hit me, and sometime when she is bored cut me. 'Thank god this faction has baggy clothes' I said in my head. I hid a mirror in my closet behind a trap door I finished building when my dad never did. I only use it to check if my wounds have healed. I have three knife cuts that are on my back that healed ok. Then I have a scar on my lower check that I got for fighting back. I realize that my body developed a little to much for my tastes. 'No wonder Marcus looks it me like I'm lust goddess.' I whisper to myself.

"ANGEL GET YOUR UGLY ASS DOWN HERE NOW!"

"YES BITCH!"

"WHAT WAS THAT?!"

"I SAID YES MOM!"

I put on my grey slacks, grey dress, and my grey jacket. Which is to tight on me because my mom wont let me get new clothes. So you can see my figure. When I get down stairs the first thing that I see is the back of her hand smack across my face. "Have a nice day at school." She says. Wow that's the nicest thing she has ever said. "Hope you break a fucking leg!" and there goes the insult.

I walk to the bus stop Tobias but he doesn't see me because he has his head down. I tip toe towards him I jump at him and say "Hey toby!" he jumps so high he almost falls off the bench. "Angel you sacred me half to death!"

"Awwww! then how will I scare you again if the next time I do it you'll be dead?" I said with a fake sad face.

"Then don't it anymore"

"Not keeping any promises." I say in a sing song voice.

"Whatever" he said after we do our secret hand sake. It a secret because in are faction we are not allowed to show public affection.

When we get to school they start calling us for the aptitude test after lunch. They call us in order of our surnames. Tobias is called before I do. he gets up."Good luck" I say

"Thanks" and he walks off.

20 minutes later...

He sat right back in the seat next to me. He looks very disturbed. I ask him "are you alright?"

"Jonathan Everdeen and Angel Everton." the called my name before he could answer.

I go into a room that is cover in mirrors and shine because a bright light from the celling.

I see a Dauntless guy with black hair and soft brown eyes.

"Come on don't be shy. Relax take a seat. I'm Amar."

I take a seat and he starts attaching wires to both sides of my head. Then he does the same to himself. I notice a large snake tattoo that wraps around his arm and the head of the snake lands on his hand.

"What's with the snake?" I ask I couldn't help it.

"It's a fear I overcame a few years back."

"Oh"

"Hmm"

"What?"

"Your a little bit too curious for your own good be careful."

"Your are a little bit to observant for your own good be careful." I said back. he look at me for a moment then hands me a small cup with clear liquid.

"Drink it"

"Why?"

"Just do it. Trust me."

I drink the liquid then everything went dark

I open my eyes but I'm in a room that is similar to the room I was just in, but it bigger and empty. I turn around and there's a table with a bone and a gun. "Choose wisely" I voice form above says. "Why? What do I need them for? "Choose wisely" he says again. "Why?" I say "Fine don't choose." Then the table disappears. All of a sudden, I hear growling I turn a see a big black and grayish wolf. I try to stay calm so it won't attack me. I get on my knees and put my back straight. to show it that I'm not a threat. From my knowledge about them I don't look at it in the eyes and stretch out my hand so it can get my scent. It smells my hand then licks it. I pat the back of it neck. Then I realize that it started to growl again but not at me but a little girl.

"Come here puppy come here." She says as she run toward it. I tried to warn her but The wolf charged at her. I broke in to a sprint and jump on it back then it tried to attack me. Then a moment later I hear a crack. I broke its neck then the scene changed.

Now I'm on a bus the seats are all taken so I stand holding on the railing. A man next to me with a newspaper in his hands asks "Do you know this guy?" I look at the picture of a man with short hair and a huge scar that goes along his face. I read the head it says 'Murder most wanted' I start to have a weird feeling in my stomach like I do. What happen to me if I do? But it not real so why do I care. "No. No I don't" I say to him in a calm face and voice. He gets up comes in my face. "Lair" he says "No I am not if I did I would have told you already." I snap back at him. he looks in to my eyes and said "please if you know him tell me you can save me and my daughter." in a soft whispering voice. "I'm sorry I don't know him I can't help you." back to him then say "But I can make sure no one hurts you or your family so just stay calm and relax."

I wake up back in the testing room with Amar he has a concerned look on his face. "What?" I said. but he just responds "Nothing. I'll be back". He gets up and leaves through the door. 'What did I do?' I say in my mind. He come back with a clipboard in his hands. I can see them trembling slightly. "Angel your results was inconclusive." "What? how can that be the test I to show me were I belong?" "The test didn't work on you. This is something that happen before its just very rare. They call it divergent. Your divergent." I'm what?" I say in a scared voice. "Not don't be scared just you can't tell no one in your friends, family no one." "But how did this fucking happen?" I say almost yelling at him.

He takes a deep breath and answers "Each simulation was to help rule out each choice but it did go as planned. In the first one if you pick the bone or the gun it would have been a different situation. but you didn't so it went to the wolf. When you stood up to it left dauntless." He smiles then he continues " When you made it calmed it left Amity and Erudite because in order to know how to do that you had to pay attention in school. Then when you jumped on the wolf to save the girl it left Abnegation then when it attacked you and you broke it neck so again it kept Dauntless. Lastly, the second simulation when you told the man you didn't know who the man in the newspaper was. But you hide that you did so Candor was cut out. But again Amity was kept because you were calm and you calmed him down also, And you said you'll protect them so it kept Dauntless."

My mouth turns dry and my throat goes sore. 'Will I become Factionless? what happen to me?' I say in my mind. Then I find the courage to speak "So what do I do?" "I deleted the footage and manually put Dauntless as your conclusion. Don't tell no one what they really were and I won't tell no one. and most importantly try no to show it." "Ok. I will try.".

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