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A Veelas Love

By DrMiniMe

Romance / Humor

Chapter 1

Cover photo is done by Niwelz - DeviantArt! Not mine! In this story snapes a pedo :D, Draco's a veela on his mothers side, Melissira is Draco's mate, harry's only a tinyyy bit attached to her. Poor Draco has his hands full and i just make it up as i go ^^ btw i will most likely have many spelling and grammar errors id love if you pointed those out to me :D enjoy!


Melissira Black is a insanely amazing girl, a pure-blood by the black family standards but she didn't go by blood or appearance when meeting people, or at least tried not too. She loved muggle music but had an awful voice when she sung. Her outer apperance had the serious black features that ran in the family genepool, light skin, black wild hair and grey eyes just like her fathers, Sirius Black. However her pouty lips and pixie-like height was of her late mothers Leonora , who had died during child birth.

MELISSIRA POV

I laid in my bed just staring at the ceiling as I waited for my father to get up and levitate my trunk and pet snake, Auctumnus. Amazingly one of the unknown traits of my mothers side was parsel-tounge it was quite a surprise for my father and myself when he walked in the store and saw me conversing with the snake. I still remembered the day I got her.

-"Meli go pick out a pet for hogwarts and this time remember, Man eating plants are not acceptable." my father said smiling softly

I only grinned and shrugged inocently.

I walked in, out of the busy streets and alley ways of diagon alley, and looked around at the owls, mice, cats and a snake? I looked at it closely and saw it was staring back at me, i raised my eyebrow at it as if saying "what the hell do you think your looking at?"

it hissed and said "do not give me that look human i could bite your ass from here for all you know"

i looked around to see if anyone else saw it talking to me everyone was as oblivious as ever so i walked over to the snakes glass box and stared down at it. it only hissed in annoyance. I whispered

"did you just talk?"

"What did you think i did? and why are you here human?" it hissed even more annoyed "Im here to buy a non man-eating/ dangerious pet." i whipsered back all at once its eyes light up and sounded like it was screaming with excitement

"BUY ME! BUY ME!"

I fell backwards in surprise only to be caught and when i looked up it was some guy with greasy hair in a black outfit. I raised my eyebrows and said

"Who might you be my good sir?" I then heard the bell ring alot louder than i expected, stating someone had entered the store and promtly had a spaz attack while shrieking. It was then I heard

"MELISSIRA!" by the sound of the voice I automaticly knew it was my father.. freaking out...again. I then noticed how much this would look like greasy-hair-guy was hurting me or something, so I decided to do the most logical and muggle-like thing...

I jerked free my arm and took a Twix bar out of my pants pocket and started munching on it.

My father must of seen me munching on a Twix and slowed his pace. I looked around and saw everyone ,and i mean everyone was looking at me. I suspiciously looked around a bit and said

"No matter how much you alll want this twix its mine I tell ." and went back to munching. Finally my father got there and started screaming at me.

"MELISSIRA DONT YOU KNOW TO NOT TAKE MUGGLE CANDY FROM RANDOM PEOPLE?" so I shouted back

"GREASY-HAIRED-GUY DIDNT GIVE IT TO ME! I GOT IT IN LONDON SO THERE!" from the corner of my eye I saw greasy-haired-guy raise his eyebrows and the snake was just laughing. I just made a small sound like a "humph" and jerked my other arm away from greasy-haired-guys hand, and said

"For your information o'father dearest, he"as i said this i pointed to greasy-haired-guy "stopped me from falling on this extremely, lovely floor! It was because of this, stupid snake"

I made a exaggerated move of my hand which made my Twix fly out of my hand and smacked the snake square in its forehead and fell down in front of it, me and the snake stared at it a while in utter shock and started laughing at the same time, after a few seconds our laughter was quieted down by the immensely scary glare of my father

"okay yea anyways, the snake moved and I fell , funny story right?" I rushed the sentence and felt extremely small under my fathers glare. He stared a while and then turned to greasy-haired-guy and started to apologize for me. By now everyone had turned their heads back around to what they were doing before

"Sir I-...Snape?" oo so greasy-haired-guy has a name...

"Black? This is your daugther?" said snape utterly bewildered

"Yea..." I wanted to bang my head against a wall for my dads great reply.

"Then I suppose I should go wash my hands to get this filth off." My eye twitched, oooo he did NOT just diss me! I then spoke up, at the young age of 11 I could be heard pretty well.

"Listien here buddy, I dont know who the hell you are but you .." I heard my dads patronizing tone of voice "Melissira what did I tell you about the muggle swear words?" It was then me and my father started to argue and when we had finished we turned to see.. nothing, snape had most likly left when we were bickering. I turned to my father and said

"Well... I've found a pet."

"great tell the clerk and meet me in Olivanders."

My dad had been a bit surprised when I came out with a large snake on my shoulders.

"MELISSIRA HURRY UP OR YOU'LL MISS THE TRAIN!" my dad shouted up the stairs to me

"I'M COMING!" I shouted back at him.

I know its tiny but theres more coming ^^ whenever I get the motivation to do it o.o

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