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Angel- the life death and afterlife of Felicity Smoak

By AlexandraRylie

Adventure / Fantasy

Prologue

Voices. They are the only thing I hear besides the buzzing in my head.

'Our father...'

Gun shots come next as I hear glass shattering around me.

'Who art in heaven...'

Then a burning sensation begins in the back of my skull.

'Hollowed be thy name...'

It spreads slowly to my neck. A trail of fire searing it's way through my body.

'Thy will be done in earth...'

"Felicity!"

'As it is in heaven....'

Oliver? Why is he calling my name?

'Give us this day our daily bread....'

The familiar sound of an arrow being shot a high speed pierces my ears almost as soon s it hits some else's flesh and bone.

'And forgive us our debts ....'

A gut wrenching cry breaks my heart.

'As we forgive our debtors...'

It sounds strangely like Oliver too.

'And lead us not into temptation.....'

"I'm sorry Felicity."

'But deliver us...'

And that was the last thing I heard for a very long time.

'From evil.'


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