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Harry Potter | The ghost of Hogwarts |

By harrypotterfreak1234

Adventure / Romance

Chapter 1 the loss of a great hero

I couldn’t handle the pain anymore. I just wanted to die so I did the only thing I could think of. Taking a knife from the kitchen while I was cooking. I was just lying in my room checking my injuries for broken bones. I was reminiscing about my life, about who would miss me. Snape? not likely. he would just cheer if I were gone. nobody loved a good for nothing freak, besides I would be free from my relatives and the pain. I was now dragging the blade across my veins being thrilled to leave. slowly but surely my soul was retreating from my body, leaving my broken and soulless body behind. for others to find not that anybody would care for that matter. Even Ron and Hermione would be glad because I heard them speaking about getting paid to pretend to be my friends. my last breath was coming out in shallow gasps as I started to feel dizzy and disorientated. Eventually my world became black. And that is the story of how I died. But the unfortunate is that my soul still swerves around. I was currently watching Ron and Hermione. It wasn’t even a week after my dead that they were trying to take my money but little did they know that I still had access to my account. I also blocked their keys to enter my vaults. Tonight it was going to be a good night. Because I was going to appear during an order meeting.


"Hello everybody miss me?" "potter but how is that possible?" asked a curious Snape. "I am a ghost that's why. " Everybody was still asking questions about how I could be a ghost.

“I think it’s time that we skip all the questions. Would you like to know why I killed myself?” I asked to everybody.

Snape pov

I just was to stunned to realize all the horrors that potter must have been through. I knew what It was like to feel the pain of being abused. I already had the scars to prove them and the memory’s stuck inside my head. Some gruesome memory’s that would never disappear. All throughout the explaining I began to see the faces of the order that were really out to be. I finally understood why Potter would do this. Because just of the mention that all the money they stole from him was being taken back to his vault. That was when their true faces showed, I couldn’t believe that I have spied for these people all my years.

Harry pov

When I was finished explaining all the horrors and beatings that I survived. I noticed that Snape started to look at me in amazement probably because of the amount of money that I had. All the others of the order were looking at me with greed in their eyes and some of them with anger. Because I just revealed the major plot and planning that they have done throughout the years. All I could think about was getting my sweet, sweet revenge and having some fun doing it. I also knew that I was never going to be seeing my parents in heaven but it was a price worth paying to see the faces of the people that betrayed me. I started thinking about mom, dad and Sirius when all of the sudden there was a glowing white light. I had to cover my eyes for a bit because of the lost eyesight and noticed three figures floating there looking at me with smiles on their face. It was the persons I still kept thinking about even after their deaths. “Mom, dad and Sirius!! What are you doing here?” I yelled seeking answers from them.

“Well sweetie, your father, Sirius and I were brought here to guide you and to have a new chance at life with our precious son. Even though were dead and ghost, but we still can hug each other because we love you and were hoping for a chance like this.” My mother explained. “Yeah Prongslet, so now we can play all sort of pranks on the people that betrayed us and the people who stole your money.” Sirius explained to me. Looking towards my father I noticed that he started looking at me with pride merely by the mention of pranking people with me and Sirius. Mom on the other hand didn’t look pleased and that’s why she cuffed them both over the head. “Lilly!!!” My dad and Sirius shouted simultaneously. Mom just stood there grinning, probably remembering the good old days.

Everybody from the order just sat there with their mouths open and Dumbledore just looked like he swallowed a lemon, probably because he knew now his plans wouldn’t work anymore.

Snape pov

My first thought that came in my head was ‘Shit, now I’ve done it the one person that I loved and the other two persons that I loathed were back again as ghost and were here to prank people.’ This is going to be great still under the prank war and now that Harry has joined then I will never be resting in peace. ‘Why the hell am I calling Potter Harry?’ I thought to myself. Oh well let’s just see were my feelings would end up to. I always knew that I like Harry but I just still kept thinking of him as Potters son. That’s why I never explored that Harry would have another personality than Potters. At least the hatred that he had for me wasn’t only in my person but the entire order. I could always ask Harry if he would ever give me a chance to prove myself against him, Lily, James and Sirius. I still would like to be forgiven for being the cause of the Potters dead, because of my fault and my ignorance I sent them to their deaths. Right after my inner revelation of my past mistakes I got the burning pain in my mark notifying me that the Dark Lord wished to see me, Immediately.



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