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Life After Afterlife

By TheFanFictionist1010

Fantasy / Romance

The Awakening

'How long have I been here?'

"Well you've been here for 6 years, why do you ask?"

'I was just wondering.'


"Hey look it's a baseball!"

'How did it get here, mom?'

"Well I guess it's because of the baseball field tha was built 3 years ago."

Some noise..

'Hey dude that was an awesome home run!'

"Yeah I know right! But where the ball go?"

'I don't know somewhere close I guess, look there's a house over there with a big yard! Check if they have the ball.'

"I hope that I haven't broken any windows yeah I hope so too."

A minute later

"Honey, sit still look out for the glass! I don't want it to crawl under your covers. Look out where you put your hands I don't want you to have a cut."

'Of course.'


'Looks like somebody is at the door.'

Mom walks towards the door.

'Miss, could you be able to help me?'

"Yes, with what?"

'I have a lost of baseball of mine. I hit a homerun and it went flying very far...'

"Well yes indeed, we have your baseball."


"Yes, my daughter Yui and I."

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