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By Fred Navas

Romance / Fantasy

Chapter 1



In a very beautiful, peaceful and quiet place, is a teen hairblond and blue dress, accompanied by another teen with pink hair and clothing, both characterized by a peculiar black line that runs from their eyes to neck.

-Zatch, it has bee been so long - she says with a sigh, looking at the sky - Do not tell me you do not miss him? 

-Kiyo? - Answered the young man- of course I do, but you know the rules, mamodos are not allowed travel to the human world, but every 100 years. 

-I know, yet I still miss Megumi ... - she says sighing again -I hope to see her again someday... putting that on the one hand, Zatch there is something I want to tell you for a long time ... - she says turning to see the boy. 

-Tia, What is it? 

-Zatch, I ... - something interrupts them, a sudden big explosion happening in the nearby castle to where they are.

 -What is happening? - they ask in shock to  another mamodo about them. 

-We must get out of here! - Says a mamodo of black hair and wears a kind of coat the same color. 

What's going on, Brago? - Asks the young blonde wanting to knowwhat happens. 

-There's no time to explain, we must leave here as soon as possible! -He says pointing to a kind of portal that has opened in a tree. - You know  the rules, we should not ...! 

-I do not care about the rules! - He says as he pushes Tia althrough the portal, andr eaching out to Zatch. 

-Go away you, I'll stay and fight! -¡No, You're an idiot, the Mamodo King must not die! -Zatch Only remains silent. 

-With greater reason I must stay! 

-It's better to leave, I will not leave without you! Suddenly an even bigger explosion is heard, but this time near wherethey are only two individuals covered by two black robes appear. 

-Do not be an idiot, you better go - says a young man like Zatch, only his hair and clothing are white. 

-Zeno! What are you doing here ?! 

-I come to help ... we must fight together against him ... 

-All right ... - says as he stands in battle pose, but suddenly falls unconscious, his brother has given a strong blow to the neck. Take him once and ... - he says giving it to the another Mamodo that awaits  in the portal. 

-We shall see later - says the other putting Zatch  on his shoulders. 

-That's for sure! - He said while closing the portal, preparing for battle -Now there is no one to stop me - he says heading for the two types. 

-Controls Minimus - a very familiar voice is heard on mamodo. 

-You can not be! - Zeno screams, while his body is consumed by a terrible explosion.


Somewhere in Tokyo, a completely full stadium, were can be seen a singer of brown hair, dressed like a princess. The public is the is cheering and chanting each of the songs while she throws smiles and kisses in the air. 

-Very well Megumi, this was the best concert you have given throughout your career- Says a tall, brown hair, which is a headset, the singer turns to see him with a smile - this is the perfect time, I'll ask her tonigth ...  - says shakily as he stuffs his hand in his pocket for a little black velvet box - perhaps not the biggest, but she would understand... - says blushing, while Megumi flips him to see, he just hides the box, as if she had seen anything, she just smiles... That was a close one... - says sighing, but vibration stops thought - Oh yeah ... yeah ... Hi Mom, we're fine, we're in the middle of a concert ... yes ... uh-huh ... What, are you all right? ... What? ... Well we will there as soon as we can, yes we are mum, bye - Kiyo says concerned about the news that he have just given, he must notify Megumi as soon as possible. Half an hour after the concert ends, Kiyo takes apart his girlfriend to tell her the news, she screams of joy and hugs Kiyo, but this is indifferent. 

-Kiyo What is happening to you? - Asks the singer, more concerned. 

-Mom would not tell me, but it is vital that we go forth in this time, but I also need talk to Sherry. Once he finished saying this, he hooks his arm with Megumi's and head together toward the exit… 

Not far from there, there are two hooded individuals, which they talk in a rather peculiar way. 

-The moment of truth will come very soon - says the tallest person with visible female voice . 

-Better we attack as soon as possible - said the second person -I want to kill them this instant. 

-Everything in due time, friend of mine, all in due time - says showing a macabre smile while they vanish into thin air. 

Minutes later, in the house of Kiyo's mother, Tia is crying over Zatch uncontrollably while watching him unconscious on a bed while Brago outside the room, with an indifferent face, but her face denote danger and confusion. Can you tell me what happened? - Kiyo's mom asks Tia as she puts a hand on his shoulder to . 

-I have not the slightest idea ... - said trying to calm down. 

-I have a theory - says Brago breaking the silence - is an ancient Mamodo legend  that has passed from generation to generation ... - said while taking air to tell the story… 

Not far from there, Kiyo is driving a car at full speed, whileMegumi speaks by phone. 

-No Is a joke, it's true Sherry, they are back! - He says happily. 

-Unfortunately I will not be in Japan until a few days because of business, so I will visit in a week to drop me a Brago greetings, take care- says the voice of a young blonde sitting in a first class plane, talking on a private phone, while watching out the window - has been so long ... - she said with a sigh of longing. 

Meanwhile, at Kiyo, when Brago tell the story ends the doorbell sounds. 

-I'm coming! - Kiyo's mom says getting out of bed to go open the door. 

-Hey mom - Kiyo says kissing his mother on the cheek - How have you been? 

-I'm fine son, but could not say the same for your friend Zatch - says crestfallen. 

-What do you say? Where is he? - Kiyo asks concerned. 

-He is upstairs in your old room - says as the three of them climb stairs. -

Brago, Good to see you again - Kiyo says sarcastically. 

-I'd say the same, but we are in a great crisis, apparently only three of us escape from that brutal attack, and Zatch has not awakened from the blow his brother gave him… 

-Wait a minute - said Kiyo dismayed - Zeno attacked again? 

-On the contrary, he helped us out, but I doubt h has achieved to escape alive ... 

-That's awful - Kiyo says head down, keeping silence for the fallen. 

-For the moment, I think is better to rest - Kiyo's mother says yawning -tomorrow they can do whatever they want, it's too late, Kiyo, and Brago will remain with Zatch this room, Megumi and Tia can stay in my room, I will be on the couch - she says she expecting a reply from his son, but he is already asleep, and Brago has left the room, Megumi only gives a kiss on the forehead to Kiyo, his mother puts a sheet, and leave the bedroom. Not far from there, perched on a tree, the same silhouettes are talking. 

-This Is the moment to strike! - Says the smallest shadow. 

-We must be honorable, ever you have to attack an enemy while he is down -the woman says. 

-I see you have followed us - says a chilling voice that seems to come behindthem. 

-Brago! - Exclaims the woman turning to look. 

-Damn, I know who you are! - Removing the hood says the woman, butshe turns quickly, but he clearly sees that long brown hair that covers the entire left side of her face, and a white headband.

-Idiot, without your partner you are completely useless against me! - Says the other unknown. -I'll Show a spell that can end a scum likeyou! - He says directing a punch to the face of mamodo ... --Controla Gravitae! - the woman says still turn back, Brago immediately becomes involved in a purple glow, and feels how his body is pressed and brutally fired at the ground, knocking him unconscious, while a amountain of leaves covers him completely 

-Come on now, before the others come! - Says using a spell while vanish into thin air, but in theroom no move is .

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