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To my Beautiful Ray of Sunshine

By Turquoise_ink_Pen

Children / Humor

To my Beautiful Ray of Sunshine

A poem for my beautiful ray of sunshine:

Dear Maka,

I know that I probably get on your nerves,

But it's for the better and not the worst,

Although I know you're a tough shell to crack,

That annoying Soul boy is going to give me a heart attack!

I just want you to know that Daddy loves you,

And that you don't have to cry if you ever miss me when your gone,

And honey, don't get me wrong; I know that your strong,

Just please be careful AND STAY AWAY FROM THAT KID!

ALRIGHT fine, I trust the both of you, But as for Soul,

ONLY A LITTLE BIT! I'LL SEE YOU SOON!

As for now I'm with the reaper,

And it's OK if you truly don't like Soul either,

I love you my Maka-Maka have a great time!

After all you are my beautiful ray of sunshine.

Love, Dad.

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