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Sweet baby Demolisher

By Hannah McCoy

Humor / Children

Chapter 1 the accident


Sweet baby Demolisher chapter 1 the accident

At the Conquerdriod base camp the leader Conquortrone had something planned. "Maser! Is that weapon ready yet?!" Maime roared. "Almost and it's Trapper!" Trapper snapped back from his desk where he was working. "Then get to it!" Maime hollered. Just once I like to knock him through the wall. Trapper thought. He was putting the finishing touches on the laser Conquortrone wanted such funny looking laser. It looks like a child's toy almost. Trapper thought. "Tripper!" Maime bellowed. "Done and its Trapper you dolt!" Trapper yelled.

"So this is it?" Maime asked. Trapper nodded. "Good work." Conqourtrone said. "Since Maime and I believe that done such good job we will test on someone other than you, Maime now." Conquortrone said. Trapper cowered. Maime aimed the weapon at Cutter and fired. Cutter gasped in surprise. The beam of light was a pale green. Cutter began getting a smaller by the second. In less than a minute the loyal warrior was a sparkling. "Whoa." Trapper said. Conqourtrone began to laugh at the sight of Cutter and so did Maime. The other Conquerdriods came in and they began to laugh to. Then Conqourtrone ordered everyone to shut up. And they did. "Trapper return him to normal." The leader ordered. Trapper nodded then turned the nob from sparkling to youngling to teenager to adult and fire it. This time a bright orange beam covered Cutter and in a few a seconds Cutter returned to his normal age. Cutter looked himself over to make sure was alright. Then he looked at their leader with glare. "Why me and not Reversal!?" Cutter demanded. "You were in the wrong place at the wrong time." The leader answered. "Son of techno rat." Cutter whispered. They ignored him.

"What are you planning to do with the laser?" Trapper asked. Conquortrone laughed. "Why to make our enemies unable to lead them." Conquortrone said. "Good plan sir." Trapper said. So it was to be done.

The team headed up to the Rocky Mountains. Even though Megatron and Optimus had the sneaking feeling they were walking into a trap. And Demolisher was getting frustrated then Megatron told them the sooner they found the minicon the sooner they could leave .This looks similar to the place where Cliffjumper obtained Rockclimb. Optimus thought.

Maime knew if they didn't find their original targets they would need new ones. Demolisher would be a good one, so would that annoying Snow cat! The chosen one Side swipe would be as well. So we have many targets to choose from. Maime thought. "Maime Reversal and I found Optimus , Megatron and Demolisher due east from here." Trapper said. "Good, Trapper you turn the leaders into sparklings. Reversal you kept Demolisher busy." Maime ordered. They nodded and left.

Megatron, Optimus and Demolisher kept walking then Trapper appeared and attacked. " Prepare for elimination!" Trapper said and the double attack got them. "I'm coming sir!" Demolisher said. Then Reversal hit him. "Ow!" Demolisher cried and began to fight reversal. "Time for your extermination!" Trapper told the leaders. Optimus got out of the way while Megatron was struggling to get his feet the laser was pointed at Megatron. "I got to do something." Demolisher whispered. Then he knock Reversal off his feet. "Look out sir!" Demolisher said and pushed Megatron out of the way. As Trapper fired the laser. Demolisher wanted to move but the light was too cold and made his body hurt. Demolisher began shrinking getting smaller by the second. The light so bright Megatron and Optimus had to cover their eyes.

The laser began to hiss and steam was rising from it. It was overloading and BOOM! It exploded.

The light died down and they couldn't see Demolisher then Optimus and Megatron looking into the large shallow crater was Demolisher. But Demolisher wasn't an adult anymore in place of that was a sparkling curled up into a little ball.

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