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Return of the Dai Gurren Brigade

By Adaron

Drama / Action

Spiral Power Reawaken's

"4,000 years since the anti spirals where defeated humanity is once again about to be snuffed out. Not by beings that want to preserve the universe and protect it from the spiral nemesis but by their own kind who have lost the path that Simon and Kamina have paved. I Viral Captain of the Super Galaxy Dai Gurren am the last member of the Dai Gurren Brigade. And yet even I don't know how to piece the spiral race back together. Being a Best man I can't produce any spiral power so I can't power my ship. We have too use primitive fusion engines to power it. All weapons and shields are only at 35% of full power. Since that dark day a 2000 years ago, when a another spiral race decided to break off from the Spiral Galactic peace conference and start attacking fellow spiral beings, it got so bad that people developed newer and different gunman and started to call them mobile suits instead. Now the whole universe no longer remembers how to use spiral power. Nor do they care, now they only use machines that you just flip a switch and have all the power you need for as long as the fusion reactor holds up. How far they have fallen and I am powerless to do anything about it. Kamina are you upset at your people for what they have become?" As Viral gazed out into black abyss that was outer space a voice came over the intercom in Viral's quarters.

Captain Viral sir we just received a transmission from one of our transport ships declaring that they need aid. They say their engines have failed and life support is down to 42% and request immediate assistance."

Very well alter course to intercept them will bring them aboard, and give them medical aid, food, and quarters till we reach earth and drop them off.

"Aye aye sir." The intercom went silent again as Viral just kept staring into the see of stars.

"All the lights in the sky are our friends, huh Simon well now it seems most of them have turned into enemies and if I had even just one shred of spiral power I'd teach all of them that machines don't make you powerful it's what is in your heart that make you powerful. Just like you and Kamina taught me all those years ago. Well enough day dreaming about the good old days time to take charge in the boarding of civilians onto my ship and making sure all their needs are properly met. As soon as the transport ship was in Super Galaxy Dai Gurren's massive hangar bay, the passengers where allowed to step out and receive proper help if they needed it. Most passengers where just in awe of the moon size battleship. Most came up to Viral and thanked him for coming the rescue, others looked on in wonder on what race he belonged too. After all the thanking and strange looks he manage to break off from them and headed for one of the many transporting pads to bring him to the bridge. On his way to it he noticed a group of boys in a circle talking to them selves. Viral thought nothing of it as that is what most human children do, as he put one foot on the pad he heard a phrase he thought he'd' never hear again.

"WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM! Followed by a loud thud of a fist making contact with someone's face and him flying back a few feet. Viral whipped around and saw a young skinny girl in her mid teens with fiery red hair, cerulean eyes, wearing a blue tank top, which showed off her growing breast, and a black mini skirt. As she stared down at the boy twice her size. "Any one else want to call me an orphan brat?" demanded the little girl as she looked over her shoulder at the other boys. "Well come on I'll take you all on at once." She declared as the boy she just punched in the face charge at her from behind. When he was a foot away and about to slug her, a fur fist caught his own fist.

"It's not honorable to attack someone when their back is turned." Explained Viral as he yanked the boy out of his way. "You little girl what is you name?"

"The name is Kaida sir and I can take care of my self thank you very much."

"Kaida huh? That means little dragon, huh." Just then core drill around Viral's neck, started to flicker its trademark green light. "Hmmmm looks like my 4000 years of waiting are up time for the Dai Gurren Brigaded to step once more into the light and carve a path for the Spiral race once more.

"Ummm sir what the hell are, you talking about what is the Dai Gurren Brigade, and how can you be 4000 years old?"

"All very good questions Kaida and if you want to know the answer to them you will have follow me to my quarters and I'll explain everything to you their."

"So you want me a 13 year old girl to go with a complete stranger I don't know, to their quarters. Who the Hell do you think I am, I'm not stupid you might be one of those weird people that do bad things to little kids like me so the answer is Hell NO get lost fuzz face I'm not going with you not now or ever."

"I've got candy and soda."

"Candy and soda lets go mister by the way what is your name?"

"The name is Viral I'm the captain of the super Galaxy Dai Gurren."

"So this big ship is yours huh."

"That's right it's mine you want a tour of it?"

"You bet I do but first that candy and soda V."

"It's Captain Viral."

"Nah I like V, or do you prefer fluffy instead hmmmmmmmmmmmm?"

"Sigh Viral is fine, I swear she is just like Kamina and Simon combined, heaven help me if she acts more like Kamina then Simon, I don't think the universe is ready for another Kamina."

"Hey V who is this Kamina and Simon? Are they important people I should know about?"

"Of course they are important people that whole universe should know them and for what they did to free all the spiral races from the anti spirals grasp. Now follow me it's high time you learned who they are and what they did for all of us."



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