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Cotton candy memories

By KiwiiWorld

Drama / Romance

Morning mist

Tamao woke up in her bed.
The morning mist was thick as pea soup.

Chikaru were still a sleep.

Tamao was now living with Chikaru, after she and Nagisa had a big fight.
She had allways been alone, since she started at St.Miator.

But finally one day her prayers were heard, and Nagisa transferred in to St.Miator.
This meant that she wouldn't be alone anymore, cause now she would have someone to share her dorm room with.


A tear fell down on Tamao's cheek.
She whiped it away quickly.

"I must try not to think about it, I'm the new President of St.Miator, I have responsibilities now" she thought to herself.

Chikaru turned around in her bed.

This was a sign she was about to wake up.

Tamao turned around and sat on her bed.

Chikaru slowly opened her eyes.

"Good morning Chikaru oneesama" Tamao said.

Chikaru sat up in her bed, and rubbed her sleepy eyes.

"Tamao, you don't need to be so formal, we're partners now" She giggled.

Tamao had chosen Chikaru to be her vice president.
Normally this was strictly forbidden,
but after Amane and Hikari both allowed it,St.Spica's president Shion had allowed her to be both Le.Rims president and St.Miators vice president.

Tamao went into the bathroom to take a shower befor breakfast.

Somehow Tamao wasn't comfortable about how things were,

she was fine with living with Chikaru, and her teasing about those two being partners,

but she didn't like how Rokujõ had given her all her responsibilities so quickly.

Tamao sighed as the warm water ran down her back.

______________________________

Kizuna sat down beside Remon and Kagome in the dining hall.

"So listen up, do you think Chikaru and Tamao are like, girlfriends now?" she said low.

Remon blushed.

"No, do you think so?" she replied.

Kagome looked at her teddybear.
"Percivale, what do you think?"


Chikaru and Tamao entered the dining hall.

"Over here!" Kizuna shouted.

Remon covered her mouth.

"Don't shout!" she said quickly.

Chikaru and Tamao walked over to the girls and sat down.


"So are you like, together now??" Kizuna asked.

Tamao blushed.

"Kizuna chan, shhh" Remon said embarrassed

Chikaru giggled and grabbed Tamao's hand.

"Yes, we're pretty close!" She laughed.

Tamao didn't do anything, she was too embarressed.

After breakfast it were time for school, however Tamao had to to a meeting with the other presidents and Etoile sama.

The meeting was about spring, and when they would get their spring break.

Shion was the one talking, she kind of took over as the "leader" after Miyuki left.

I bet she has been waiting for this opportunity for years, Tamao thought.

Amane said she thought it would be best to have their spring break from 1th of May, and end it 7th of May.

Shion didn't agree, she thought it would be far too late, as summer vacation was just around the corner.

"What about 15th of March then?" Chikaru spoke.

Shion thought for a second.

"Ok, when should we end it then?" she asked.

Tamao thought it would be perfect to have a whole week as spring break, then they could come back the next monday,
but she said nothing.

"What about 15th of March, and we'll end it 22th of March?" Chikaru asked.

Shion looked at the calender.

"That's monday till monday" She replied.

Tamao looked up.
It was as if Chikaru had some what read her mind.
Shion thought for a while.

"Ok, then it's settled, March 15 it is then"
She walked out, and the meeting ended.

"She's like the leader" Tamao said.

Chikaru giggled.
"She has allways been jelouse of Miyuki san cause she has allways been famous because of the previous Etoile sama" Chikaru replied.

Tamao could some how understand how Shion must have felt, but still, she found her a bit up tight.


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