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Potter Family Fights

By CountryGirl96TAKEN

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The Lily, James, and Albus fight

Lily skipped in singing the only exception by paramore. James saw his sister very happy he went over

"why so happy?" he asked she just smiled at him replaying

"I have a date"

"who?" he asked. Lily looked at him and laughed before saying

"Scorpius Malfoy" James smile turned into a frown.

"WHAT!" he did not like that Lily could see. James sighed at his sister

"Malfoy the one kid that I can not tolerate really!" Lily was on the edge of crying but she didn't

"he's not a bad guy James!". James could hear the scaredness in his sisters voice

"You are not dating him Lily!"

"YOU DON'T TELL ME WHO I CAN AND CAN NOT DATE JAMES SIRIUS POTTER!". That was the first time in a very long time that he remembered his sister calling him by his whole name she was very pissed off he could tell.

"BLOODY HELL LILY YOU CAN'T DATE A MAFLOY!" Albus heard all the commotion he went to find out what it was about only to see both his brother and sister screaming at each other

"WHAT'S GOING ON!" he yelled over them he however did not have the loudest mouth James did but James also had a temper as bad as there dad they all did that was something they all shared but he got his dad's eyes and mom's eye sight. James however got there's dad sight and mom's eyes. Lily got the mom's eye's sight and hair. James and Albus both shared there dad's hair. James was first to speak

"Lily's dating a Malfoy" he said Malfoy like it was a disease. Albus saw nothing wrong with Malfoy

"So?"

"SO!ALBUS THIS IS SCORPIUS MALFOY WERE TALKING ABOUT!"

"SO WHAT LET HER YOU SHOULD BE HAPPY NOT MAD LILY'S FINALLY FOUND SOMEONE!". Lily had enough

"ALL OF YOU ENOUGH I'VE HAD ENOUGH JAMES SIRIUS POTTER YOU DO NOT CONTROL MY LIFE OR ME ALBUS SEVERUS POTTER NITHER DO YOU!SO STOP!" she couldn't stop herself she ran off crying into the common room girl dorms. James and Albus watched there sister run off tears streaming down her face they both automaticily leapt into big brother mode Albus was to speak first this time but not in a friendly tone

"Now look what you've done you made Lily cry"

"I did no such thing your the one that made her cry"

"No I-" before Albus could finish Hugo there cousin came over

"Um what's going on me and Rosie were talking when Lily ran past us to the dorms crying mumbling stupid older brothers" James sighed and looked at his cousin

"She's dating Malfoy and I told her she can't and Albus made her cry saying so what let her you should be happy not mad she's finally found someone" Albus was not going to be accused of making his sister cry

"You made her cry by saying she can't date Scorpius" Hugo sighed knowing where this was leading

"Obviously you both made her cry" James and Albus glared at him Hugo thought they were gonna kill him but the glares softened and James did something very unexpected

"Your right we both did"

"Yea..." Albus trailed off James looked at Albus

"Should we talk to her"

"Yea...I think so"

"Okay let's" they both walked that way only to be stopped by another cousin Hugo's sister Rose

"James Potter and Albus Potter how dare you too make poor Lily cry"

James sighed

"we know were gonna go talk to her right now and make things better"

Rose glared at the two

"You better" she let them pass and they went up and into the dorm to Lily's bed James was first to speak again

"Hey Lil um...I'm sorry you can date Malfoy I don't care"

"That's not what I need to hear"

"I support it"

"There it is" Lily gave a small smile and looked at Albus who was looking at the floor only cause tears were falling and he was not gonna be called baby by James again James saw the tears

"Al ar-are you all right?" Albus heard the concern

"I-I-I'm sorry Lil I didn't mean to make you cry" he had tears streaming down his face as well Lily saw how caring her older brother's were being

"I'm fine Al no need to apologize I forgive you both" she smiled at her older brothers James smiled back and did something very un James like he grabbed his sister and brother into a group hug they didn't see the small tear running down his face but he could feel it and Lily felt it when it dropped onto her head she knew it was not rain she smiled at James then Albus a smile that said I'm happy now James smiled at his family as did Albus then Lily remembered something

"Hey Al congrats on making seeker and captain" she smiled she saw James eyes light up he would have made both if he tired but he never thought himself to be good at quidditch the family thought different she saw Albus's face turn into a grin

"Thanks" he smiled he was proud of himself later that night anyone passing the Gryffindor common room would hear the three Potters laughing despite there fight with each other


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