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Enter Now Naruto's World: The Zannen(Children of Regret)

By Simpaul Simon

Adventure / Action

Chapter 1

Enter Now Naruto's World: The Zannen(Children of Regret)

Story notes: The Story takes place around 41 years in the future, after the Great War started by Tobi. Chapter notes: This is a story of how some children from the U.S. became entangled in the World of Naruto. Our Story begins with a man, who comes before a Lord in a castle of the Earth country.

Guard 1: I have a traveling entertainer here, scheduled to see Lord Niyabingi!

Head Guard: Bring him to me, I will oversee him personally there will be no mistakes, I put my life on it!! Increase Security 10 fold!!
>They Physically move the entertainer before lord Niyabingi of the Earth Country.

Lord Niyabingi: I see you"ve taken notice of our Gems(the inner walls of the entire castle is cover with priceless gems)
If you perform well, i may give you some.

Entertainer:If it pleases my Lord!,...now allow me to serenade my Lord's ears.

Lord Niyabingi: This wouldn't be genjutsu would it?

Entertainer: Only if you mean sweet melodic music,..I assure you there is no mind tricks within what I do.

Lord Niyabingi: What is your name, traveling entertainer?

Samu Saw: My name is SAMU SAW!

Head Guard: Samu Saw? Have I heard that name? (to other guards) Ask around see if anyone knows, or heard of a Samu Saw!!

Lord Niyabingi: Play entertainer, but be warned anything funny and my men will descend upon you with a fury not unlike hell itself! 
>Samu Saw pulls out a tree cutting saw and a block of wood, then begins to play beautiful music-all around are impressed.

Lord Niyabingi: Truly you are an exquisite entertainer Mr. Saw. As promised I have some gems for you.

Samu Saw: Sorry, but I don't want these gems.

Lord Niyabingi: What did you say? I offer you some of the best Gems my castle has to offer, and you dishonor me by turning them down? Modesty is a good trait but you disrespect me by turning down a Lord's gift! Give him the gems and toss him out! consider yourself lucky you were a good entertainer, otherwise you'd be dead now!!

Saw: There is no modesty, I don't want those useless gems, but there is a gem I do want, and if I have to kill you for it I will get it!(Saw begins hand signs and before the guards can move everyone in the room is tangled in tree saw metal) 
You fools kill me the master of the blade: KILLER SAW!!

Head Guard:Noooo! How could i have been so stupid, he's the mercenary called the Killer Saw! You're supposed to be dead!!

Killer Saw: supposed to be? Yes! Am I? No!! Can't say the same for you!(SHING!!!-the saw moves, buzzing, cutting in a serpentine manner, slicing and dicing hundreds of guards in the Lord's court.

Lord Niyabingi: Kill him you fools,..ugghkk,uck! (killer Saw appears behind lord niyabingi and slices his guts and neck with a spinning hand saw)

Killer Saw: pathetic, you're a lord, you of all people should know to never underestimate the assassination abilities of a true shinobi!!

>The Lord looks up in disbelief, as he slowly dies)

Killer Saw: Now where would you keep the most important gem?,...You're a sniveling self-centered Lord so it must be close to you at all times, but you're too much of a coward to keep it on you, so no need to search your dead carcass! Ah Yes this floor area right near the throne,...Haaaa!!(Killer Saw concentrates his chakra, bringing up a pillar with a weird gem) Orochimaru you dog, you seem to know everything, that's the only reason I haven't decided to cross you!!,...huh?,..reinforcements!!,..time to go!

> the mercenary ninja moves quickly outside the Earth country castle.

Earth guards: Quickly find him and Kill on sight the Lord has been murdered!!

> Killer Saw jumps from roof-top to roof-top until he is discovered and surrounded. Samu Saw summons a huge round band-saw that begins to spin furiously. Killer Saw launches it, and it grows even bigger ripping up buildings around the castle, slaughtering incoming reinforcement guards leaving the streets flooding with blood. The incident becomes known as Earth country's "bloody flood massacre."-The mysterious gem is delivered to a person known only as "Orochimaru."

Killer Saw: Normally I don't ask,.....
Orochimaru: Then don't!!
Killer Saw: What's so special about this gem?
Orochimaru: You should take your own advice, and continue to not ask clients intentions,....take your payment and be glad you walk away with it and your life!

Killer Saw: the last man to say that to me ,...
Orochimaru: Is what? Dead? I suppose?,..Here I am! do you want to try and cut me? Do you think your blades have a chance against me? Go ahead,..give it a try,...if you dare?!!

Killer Saw: !,..."glare"(back turned to Orochimaru) against a man that's supposed to be "long" dead? You're very interesting Orochimaru, if that's who you are,.....some other time(POOF!!)
>Killer Saw disappears in a puff of white smoke)


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