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A spring without you

By ScarletNight

Drama / Romance

A spring without you

A Spring without you

I was on my way home when a train passed by,

I looked to the leftand I saw her

I couldn't reach her

I couldn't do anything but watch

when the wind suddenly blew

and a cherry blossom petal landed on my hair.

I held the petal on my hand then i remembered

it was spring

it was spring when I met her

it was spring when she changed my life

it was spring when i fell in love with her

it was spring that she died

I unconciously looked down

when i heard someone whisper

"Look at me. Look up and look at me. You're always looking down"

when i heard that voice

I suddenly looked up

and saw her smiling at me

then i remember saying

"You exist inside a spring that can't be replaced."

it felt like time stopped at that time

as something echoed in my head

"She is never gone, she is always there just like spring that disappears but always comes back"

I continued walking back home

but the thought never left.

The End

"Time may pass but memories never forget"

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